增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I am a little boy, I saw a science fiction film. It was about the future world, in that the way people lived was so astonished. What made I especially surprised was that they could drive cars in the sky! Since then, I have been curious the future world. Just about 100 year ago, flying in the sky seemed impossible, but now we can travel around a world by plane. With the latest achieve in technology, we can deal with most of our problems. Now we can even pays our bills online. I believe that the future world will become a much more nicer place than what it is.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11处起)不计分;
3. 错误类型不涉及单词拼写。
As we all know, everyone has a dream. I had dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life going rapid, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally or physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become the successful doctor, help to save people's lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, I will do whatever I can keep everyone healthy. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I’ll concentrate more on studies. After all, only by work hard can one succeed.
As we all know,everyone has a dream. I dreamed of being a doctor since I entered the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in the great need at home and abroad. My dream is to becoming a successful doctor, helping to save people's lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, I will do whichever I can to keep everyone health. To make my dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I'll concentrate more to studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
The structure of houses has changed a lot after the first hut was built in ancient times. I often imagine what houses in the future would be like. I am sure they will be great different from what they are today.
First, houses in the future can adjust the room temperature with the changes of season. Second, they prevent waste by produce energy through their solar panels, that can be used to provide hot water in winter and cool air in summer. Beside, they can change their colors at any time satisfy their owners.
In a short, living in a future house will be amazed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear classmates,
I’ll tell you everything about my future. Every one of us is thinking about the future. Do you know what that mine is? I have decided to become the middle school teacher. Does it sound surprising?I have this dream when I was only a child. I love children. As we all can see, teachers are great needed in our country, especially in the countryside. Many parents want his children to be welleducated, and they don’t want them to be teachers. Perhaps one of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite that, I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in pace. Besides, probably there’ll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What’s more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.
With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.
I’m still a high school student, and on my way to begin my college days. Every day, devote to my study, I have learned much knowledge, which will definite promise me a good performance in my college entrance exam. I hope that I can be admitting into my dream university, one with good equipments and learned professors, who can offer me guidance when I am in a difficulty. Of course, there will be exams in college to check my study. I share the same idea with Mike that we should be active in college. I won’t bury me in books the whole day. Instead, I’ll join many clubs which I can develop my social skills and my potential. I firmly believe that only when I have a common ground I make my college life more colorfully.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of science and technology, intelligent robots will be wide used in the future. At home, robots will help people do some housework and taking care of the elderly, babies and patients. In addition to these task, robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people. In factories, robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.
Robots will change our future life by many ways, what will make it more colorful and comfortable. Therefore, we shouldn’t depend on intelligent robots too much, for they were made to help humans rather than replace us. As helpers of we humans, robots should be used properly.
I visited my aunt in a countryside near the city last week. I was surprising to see that great changes had been taken place in the countryside. Take my aunt’s family for example. We supply preciously trees and flowers to the stores in the cities and have over ten workers working for themselves. Their family’s income reached as much 100,000 yuan last year. Not only did they have a house, a car and computers, they can also afford a trip abroad every year. When asking what else they needed most, they said that they wanted to learn a few English so that they could do business with foreigners directly. To their delighted, my cousin can use that he has learned from university to help them with overseas trade.