After school, I was about to enter my apartment building when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extreme weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy, so I decided to take him home. I gave to him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprises and happiness, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family. Everyone had enjoyed his company.
Looking at the cute, happy dog today, I realize that I did the right thing. I just offered him a shelter and he has brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
After leaving a store, I returned to my car, only find that I’d locked my keys and cell phone outside. A boy which rode his bike saw me kick a tire and say a little choice words. “What’s wrong?” he was asked. I explained my situation. “But even if I could call my wife,” I said anxious, “she can’t bring me her car key, since this is our only car.” He handed me her cell phone. “Call your wife and tell her I’m going to get her key.” “That is a seven-mile round trips.” “Don’t worry about it.” An hour later, he returned with the key. I offered him some money, and he refused. “Let’s just say I needed the exercise,” he said. Then, like an cowboy in the movies, he rode off into the sunset.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In our daily life, there is always something unforgettable what that takes place between our friends and us. I remember that, on a rainy day, in my way to school I suddenly fell down and hurt myself bad. I had to stay in hospital for about two week but I was worried about my study. Then my friend Li Hua comes to see me. Whenever he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. Heard that, I was very happy. From that day on, he taught me after school every day. I was so touching. Thanks to my help, I didn't fall behind others in my class.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Peter likes experiencing different cultures. Last month, he paid visit to Beijing. To make full use of his limited time, he made a list of place of interest he wanted to see. The Forbidden City was her first destination. There were so much palaces that Peter even lost his way. The grand palaces were left a deep impression on Peter. Then he went to the National Museum, that had thousands of objects on display. The next day, Peter watches Beijing Opera in a traditionally tea-house. What excited he was! He said that he had fallen in love to Chinese culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the development of the Internet, it is easily for people to find information in just few minutes. The Internet is like a huge library that you can find whatever you want without walk around. It make our life convenient and colorful. And recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. There have been reports in China about people trying it to steal personal information for bad purposes. Also, some information does harm for society. For example, you can even find so information as how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future if not dealing with.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Fatima Madrigal of California recent gave birth to a boy and a girl. However, which surprises us most is that twins have different birth dates and even birth years. Alfredo was born on December 31st, 2021 at 11:45 p.m. About 15 minutes late, his sister Aylin was born on January 1st, 2022. Fatima said her family, including her partner Robert and their three others children, were happy to welcome the new babies. The babies were suppose to come two weeks later,but their early arrive created a rare set of birth dates and years. Aylin weighing 2.66 kilograms and her brother 2.75 kilograms at birth. The medical center where the twins were born said there are about 120,000 twins born in each year in the U.S. However, twins with different birthdays are rare, and the chance of twins being born in different years is about one in two millions.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧). 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’d like to take this opportunity to express my sincere appreciation my parents, teachers and classmates. Eighteen years has seen me grow into a adult. I can't forget the times when my parents took care of me patient and lovingly but helped me overcome difficulties one by one. When I enter school, it was lucky for me to meet many excellent and devoted teacher. It is your guidance and encouragement that makes me what I am today. Besides, classmates also play an important role in my life. With your company, I can't imagine what your school life would have been like. Again, I am grateful to all of you for that what you have done for me.
Thank you very much for listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Perhaps your teachers or parents have told you that when playing video games is bad many times. It hurts your sleep and make you do poorly in school. It appears that there’s nothing good about it. Besides, it might not be truly. It turns out that video games may be good for your brain. In a study, people played video games for half hour each day. And scientists found that some parts of their brains get bigger. They are the areas where help people solve problems. It will be excited when teenagers hear this news. You can tell their parents video games make them much smarter. However, run for 15 minutes a day also makes the same parts of the brain bigger.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exist some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
On Mother’s Day we can show our mothers our thank. Last Mother’s Day, I had the good time with my mom. I got up early in the morning and cook a delicious breakfast. My mom said it was a wonderfully breakfast. After that, we went to the park and took on lots of pictures. The sky was blue but the air was fresh. We rented a boat row around the lake. At the end of that day, I said to your mom, “Thank you, mom, I will love you forever.” What happy she was. I hope every mother can spend a pleased time with her beloved children.
