增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning, our school organized voluntary campaign, which theme was “It takes everyone’s efforts to build a civilized society”. We took part in the campaign actively, hope to do something to make more people aware of his uncivilized behavior.
We came to the city square to give out brochures. Soon some people gather to consult us about the campaign. We answered their questions with patient. Knowing that we wanted to do, they were pleased with our deeds and sang highly praise for the campaign. It was a busy day, but I felt very happy as I learned a great deal of from the campaign. Now, I truly understand only when all of us do our bits can we make our society even much beautiful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandpa was a firefighter for a long time. Besides controlling and put out fires, he saved people from burning buildings. He did a lot of another things, too. After the fire, he had to check and clean his tools so that they were always ready to the next fire. He also learned of new ways to put out fires and new things to help him did his job. Now, he has new job. He does not go into burning buildings anymore. Grandpa visits schools to share knowledges about fire safety. He showed students the burn marks on his old coat. He tells everyone how to prevent fires and how to do if there is a fire and how to be safely. My grandpa is a hero.
