增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my father wanted to make breakfast for we. He got all the things prepare in the kitchen. The recipe he chose looked easily, with a picture of a delicious breakfast. He followed the recipe and waited with patient. However, instead of the delicious breakfast he hoped for, it was turned out to be a total mess. He try to fix it. To his disappointment, he didn’t success. As a result, we went to a restaurant but had a delicious meal. There, we all had great time together, creating memories whose would last a lifetime.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My uncle is a firefighter. The work of firefighters is to put out fire and responds to emergencies involving life or property. In face of danger, we are always the first to step out. That is because I admire them very much. Last Sunday, his way back home, my uncle hear someone shouting for help. Turn around, he saw many people running to the river. He rushed over. It was turned out that a boy dropped into the river when playing with water. My uncle jumped in and saved a boy with the help of several other passers-by. The people all praised him for his selflessly behavior.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I spent an unforgettable time in last weekend. My mother has to go to the hospital to take care of my grandmother which fell ill and received an operation. Therefore, he asked me to stay at home and look after my brother, who was only three year old. I had to keep my eyes fixing on him while doing my homework. Then I did all I could please him by singing sweet songs and telling amused stories. Five hours passed by before our mom came back. I breathed a sigh of relief. This turned out to be an special experience. Now I know that being a mother of two is not so easier as I thought.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Today, my family and I went hiking in the mountain where is rich in wildlife. We had a great time explored the beautiful scenery. We set out early in the morning, full equipped with snacks and water. During the climb, we watch the wildlife and took many photo. Besides, we have had a picnic lunch at the top of the mountain and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings.
Personally, I felt a great sense of satisfaction after succeeding reaching the top. Though tiring, I considered them worth my time. Spending time with family in nature brought us much close to each other.
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Anne’s sister Margot was very upset about that the family had to move. However, she knew that she had got to go through all the difficulties for her family. She found it difficult to settle and calm up in the hiding place, because she was concern about whether they would be discovered. She suffered from lonely, but she had to learn to like there. What he really missed was going outdoors and walking the dog for her neighbour. It was such fun watch it run loose in the park. She wished she could tell her neighbour face to face if she was sorry not to be able to do it any longer, but she know that was too dangerous!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We were considering making an incredibly English magazine, and without hands-on experience we didn’t know how to start it. To get professional instructions, we left for Beijing to visiting a chief editor of Beijing Review, the famous English journal. Although he was busy, he showed me around, explaining us the amazing history of the journal and its production process. Besides, he offers us lots of practical and valuable informations. That made us especially happy was that he promised to give us continuous guidance. Every time when we are in need of help, he will come to our assistance without hesitation.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard work. Beside, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处.多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Jones,
How is everything going?
Knowing your sixty birthday is coming, I’d like to say ”Happy birthday" to you! I go to London and lived in your family one year ago. As a exchange student, I couldn’t adapt(适应) ourselves to the new living environment and lifestyle there at first. It was you which told me not to be nervous and helped me get used them. Stay with you has become the most unforgettably experience for me now. Would you like to come to China to have visit me? If so, I’ll show you around my city but take you to taste local delicious food. I m sure you will like it.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My family has a tradition of pick pear flowers for food every spring. This year, as usually, together with my parents, I go back to my hometown. We visited their grandparents and picked pear flowers as well. It was best time when pear flowers were in full bloom. That impressed us most was the sweet smell of the flowers in the air. As the trees were tall, so my grandfather and father used a long pole to getting the flowers down from the trees. My mother and I picked them off from the ground. At noon, my grandmother fried cookie for us, which were made of pear flowers mixed with flour and eggs.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I took my brother to a Father’s Day event in the city library. We quickly checked in and found two seat. At beginning, a lady shared a popular origin of Father’s Day with us. A few minutes late, she told a true story. It’s about a selfish father who sacrificed herself in the flood for the life of his daughter. It moved to us deeply. Finally, she gave each of us a bag of colored paper or taught us what to make a beautiful card. On received the gift, my father say nothing but gave us a big hug, with tears rolling down.
