增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m glad to have received your letter, showing that you long with more information about China. In my opinion, you can choose to work in China after graduation.
For one reason, over the past 30 years, China had developed into a powerful country, that quantities of job opportunities are offered to the young. What’s more, how you are studying is bad needed in China nowadays. In facts, many big companies are hoping to employ people like you.
For another reason, China is a country with very different cultures and traditions from the West that a plenty of foreigners enjoy living and working here. I’m sure you’ll adapt the environment soon. Unless you come, I will do whatever I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Miss Wang,
I am a eighteen years old senior student. I am having some trouble with my classmate at the moment. I’m getting well with a boy in my class. We often do homework together with and we enjoy help each other. We have become really good friends. And other students have started gossiping. They say that this boy and I have fallen to love. This has made me angrily. I don’t want to end the friendship, but I hate others gossiping. Now I do want to change this situation. How should I do? I would be grate if you could give me some advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are a lot researches showing that when we are kind to others, they become happier. In a sense, giving is much more better than receiving. If you spend time practice three acts of kindness each day, you will improve your level of happiness, especial if you practice such kindness often. An act of kindness can be as simple as holding the door open for someone, buy a classmate a favorite drink in the morning or giving moneys to charity. You can also call someone in need and offered a friendly ear. It is also an useful choice for you to cook a delicious meal for the family despite being tiring.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
We are often in plenty of situations which we have to make a apology to someone. Effective approaches to express your apologies can really help you receive forgiveness easy. For one thing, it is not important who is the first one to say sorry. As long as you want to make up for the relationship, you had better volunteer break the ice. For another, placing stress on particular words has a big impact in the meaning and strength of apologies. For example, saying “I’m sorry” can have more of an impact than “I’m sorry”. Another way of strengthening apologies is by using and stressing adverb: I’m really sorry, I’m so sorry. Besides, what you always keep eye contact with the person you apologize to him means you take his emotion into consideration. It really works when you apologize to someone face to face. Last but not least, above all the tips lie your sincere attitude.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At lunch in the first day of my high school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat. Late, we became close friends in following three years. One day, he shared something touching with me. “Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile?” she asked me. “I want you to know how much special you are. I was disappointing at that time, but your smile made my day,” she added.
I can’t help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi! Tom,
I'm glad to hear of you, Yes. I sometimes have a same problem. I think you'd better go to Peter's birthday party since he is my close friend. You can choose to play other games such as chess unless you don't like playing computer games. You don't need to worry too many about the science report. You can finish them on Sunday. I'm sure you can manage it. But if you don't go the party，I'm afraid you may lost the friend. Although it's true that sometimes people's needs is different, you should remember friends can always stand beside you. We must understand that each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn't know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later, Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the dinner on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smile at him. He looked verb happy and talked with me excited. That night, we had a great fun together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. In the meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which is helpful on rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. Don't hesitate, and try to take action. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known for us all, to be polite is what we senior school student should do. In fact, there are a lot of things they can do. First, it’s important for us to speak polite. We must respect others. For example, when meeting someone we know, we are supposed to greet him or her by say hello happily. Second, we can’t throw rubbish somewhere. Littering is not a good habit, which definitely do harm to the environment we live in. Another important thing is what we must follow the rules. There is no doubt that waiting in line is important rule. So never to rush into the bus.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to make an apology to you. It's a pity that I can't attend your birthday party as plan.
The reason why I have to make this change is this Saturday evening I would attend a lecture by professor Smith from New York University, who is well known for architecture. As you know, I've be enthusiastic about architecture. But I want to consult the professor about anything in the field. Besides, such an opportunity is not easily availably. Anyway, I would appreciate your allow me to invite you to my family party in next Saturday evening to make up for my absence.
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenient caused.
Yours,
Li Hua
