增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health, so he should take more exercises by riding a bike to have his body build up. In the meanwhile, you can often go out by bike together, which is helpful on rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, and you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. Don't hesitate, and try to take action. I really hope that we can make up and be good friends forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Some student don’t like talking to their parents often even if their parents love him very much. Are you getting in well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happily if you can be friends. Here is some ways to have a good talk with them. Find a good time talk, like when you're eating dinner, going out for a walk or watching the TV. Tell them something you’re interesting in, or ask them about their lives when they were young. They love to talk about their past! Meet them face to face and listened to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reason.
Some students thought they have too much homework and they are busy doing it every day. Others don’t have habit of reading. But they often spend their time on TV or the Internet.
However，reading have many advantages. By reading we can learn more about the world. Besides，it can help them think better. Also reading can make our life more meaningfully.
Here is my advice. First，teachers are supposed to giving less homework to us so that we can have more time to read. Second，if8 a good idea lo start out a reading club，so we can learn by each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays Senior 3 students are generally faced with a lot of pressure, that is rather common. To reduce it, the following suggestion may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal that is not too high. In the other words, don’t put too many pressure on yourself. Thirdly, find a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen music, go swimming or just simple go walking. Eventually, make friends with others, such as your classmates, your teachers and our parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you were really in trouble. In a word, never get yourself sticking in the pressure, for “impossible is nothing”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Weeks ago, one of my classmate brought in a very large suitcase and placed it under his bed. Though we lived on the ground floor, his suitcase soon got wet. He took it out and after drying it, he put it on his desk. My desk happened to being opposite his. It was such the large suitcase that it not only occupied the whole of his desk but also half of my as well. I was so annoyed that I pushed it angry forward. I pushed a bit of too hard and the suitcase fell his desk. Seeing this, he flies into a temper and shouted at me. Then we had a bitter quarrel. Some days later, I regretted having done that. Lived in a room, we should learn to get on well with one another.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Building a good relationship with our teachers benefit us all. Teachers showed love, concern and understand for us students on study and life. We students can always seek support and advice from us. In this case, an ideal relationship is of vital important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filling with love and respect, so we can exchange ideas free with teachers. If we students trust teachers and express our feelings clearly, or they will become our friend. Only through constant efforts we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线⑴划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，井在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
It's really kind for you to invite me to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Besides, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family. I will be fully occupying then with an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel sorry for missing the chance of such a enjoyable get-together and hoping that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible that for us to have another private meetings afterwards? If not, please don't hesitate to drop me a line about my preferable date. I do long for chatting with you. Please allow me say sorry again.
Yours,
Li Hua
