增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线, 并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My eight birthday was the most unforgettable and special one. On that day, I received a life-changing gift from my grandmother. It was a pair of roller skates. I couldn't believe my eye, when I opened the box. The shoes which total changed my life was so beautiful. That I was scared of in the past was to talk with others. I used to have no friends. The moment when I learned how to skate, I became confidence and outgoing. I made plenty friends by doing this. I'm thankful to my grandmother. Now I'm a happy girl but believe in myself. Meet new people, I smile without any fear.
要点:1. 包粽子
2. 观看龙舟赛
3. ......
注意:1. 词数80左右
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
1. 活动主题:我和我的祖国;
2. 活动形式:歌咏比赛,征文比赛等;
3. 活动的意义以及你的收获。
注意:1. 词数100左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua