Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies. But if students feel tired, they can’t pay attention to that they’re studying. They will be in a bad health. It’s also not good for his studies. In my opinions, it’s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Then they will enjoy better health and work hard. So please pay more attention to student health and growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Of all my teachers, Mr. Jenkins is the one which impresses me most. Though he is 34, yet he looks very young for his age. And he's one of the most popular teacher in our school.
Comparing with other teachers, Mr Jenkins pays more attention to his ways of teaching. He tries various of ways to make his classes lively and interestingly. In his opinion, we should not only know "what", and also understand "why". So, instead of giving us answers immediately, he inspired us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions. With her help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems. Even the students who previously lacked confidence now take active part in his class. We all appreciate that he has done for us.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale. They were quick sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine. They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety. I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem.
增加：在缺词处加一个 漏字符号（∧），并在其下面。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
On terms of living standards, some households lied in the remote regions still have a low income and live in poverty, whom are hungry for a happy life. The government is taking measure to change their lives. First, make sure all the children should be educated because education is of great important. Second, the government is making efforts improve the development of economy great. Whatever difficult the task may be, we won’t lose heart.
In a conclusion, our dream will come true as long as they work together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Would you like to live in school? We do a survey about it and here is result. Most students prefer to live in school as they like to communicate with my classmates. Besides, they can learn how to take good care of themselves in this way. Therefore, some students think live at home is a better choice. The main reason is why they can relax better at home. Moreover, they can spend more time on their family members and get on better with them.
As for me, I would rather to live in school. I will have more time to review my lesson. What’s more, it’s a wonderfully experience to live with other classmates.
增加：在缺词处增加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错误的词下画一条横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Nowadays, the great number of people, especially young people, like ordering meals online. It’s not surprised. First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people had less time to cook even one meal for themselves. Second, the development of technology brings us smart phones and new apps, what may lead to the increase in online service. However, we should pay more attention to food. As we all know it, our health is closely related to what we eat. Although the service provides us convenience, we must take the food safety into considerate. Home-made food is cleaner and healthy, but I prefer to cook food at home rather than ordering meals online.
