增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With popularity of the Internet, more and more people prefer to going shopping online because of its advantages. Online shopping save us a lot of valuable time. What’s more, there are a wide variety of goods for us to choose from, which may be cheaper than that in shops. Though it is convenient to go shopping online, the problems it caused can’t be ignored. Since we can’t see the actual goods on the Internet, so the quality cannot be ensured. Beside, lots of advertisements on the Internet are untrustworthy, so sometimes, the customers are easily cheating.
In my opinion, we should be carefully while we are enjoying the convenient of online shopping.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Sometimes I get the feeling when living in a city makes people much lonely than before. People always feel stranger cannot be trusted. And that is not normal to start talking to anyone or even smile at someone. I want change this. Last week, I went skating. A man ran by smile. He said something to us about doing sports and that he hoped to be able to finish his run. I smiled back and said that he certain would. And today, a family cycled by when I am in the park. One of the girls waved at me with a smile, and I waved back enthusiastically. I believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.
增加：在缺词处加—个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There is no denying that mobile phones are playing an importantly role in our daily life. However, the phenomenon people are too addicted in their mobile phones is becoming more and more popular. Mobile phone addicts can’t help check their mobile phones all day, even when they are walking on the road. As the result, their communication with people around them becomes less and less. Besides, their healthy is greatly affected. Many are suffered from neck pains, for example.
In my opinion, it is time we throw away our mobile phones and raised our heads up. We should spend less time communicating with our family and friends face to face.
