增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin Tom was attended a pool party when one of the boys was found at bottom of the pool. The another kids pulled the boy out and Tom found so that he wasn’t breathing. A passer-by noticed the situation but quickly called 120. However, he was too nervous to knowing what to do. Tom was calmly and he quickly began to perform CPR, an emergency lifesaving procedure, on the boy. It was his quick thinking and positive attitude which saved the boy’s life. Since the incident, Tom has been responsible with ensuring that all the student in his school are trained in first aid.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改∶在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶ 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere. They can' t stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
Actually, phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending message, particularly in the class. On the other, using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up. Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us. Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable, can you realize the happiness of life.
