增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
With the homeworks finished last Saturday, I went to countryside to visit my uncle. At about 8, I set out and arrived at my uncle’s after an hour. Seeing me, he felt very exciting and welcomed me warmly. I handed him the fresh fruit and flowers bought in the supermarket but he gave me some snacks. Then we went to catch fish. It was not long since we caught a lot of fish. Have brought them home, my uncle cooked some for me. After lunch, I helped him bathing the dog and he praised me with a big smile in his face. When it was time for me to leave, my uncle gave me some gifts that I liked very much, and hugging me. It was an amazing day which I will never forget it forever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a fruit truck sell fruits in the parking lot of Walmart yesterday. My mom took a big box and it has 6 mini baskets of strawberries in it.
She knew we could not finish them all before they went badly. So today she asked my dad give some to our neighbors. He initially resisted and he did eventually go to three of our neighbors and gave each one a basket. On returning back to home, he told me which he said to them, which surprised me! “Hi, my family and I are going around spreading loves to the neighborhood by giving out baskets of strawberries. Would you like any?”
We gratefully accepted. That was an sweet interaction.
增加:在缺词处加个漏宁符号(˄), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的问用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It happened in Friday. Tom is the first to come to the classroom. When he came up to his seat, however, he found his bench broke. Seeing there was nobody around, he decided to change it with John's, so he did. After the while, John came. When he saw the broken bench, he carried it out of the classrooms. Tom didn't know why he was going to do. So Tom came out, find that John had begun to repair the broken bench. Tom's face turned into red. She said to John, “Let's fix it together.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both dad and I planned do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad thorough cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When she came back, I found an bunch of flowers in his hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in the kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favorites. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My aunt and uncle live in the countryside, they keep a dog called Xiaohei. One day my aunt go to work in the fields, taking along my little cousin. My cousin and Xiaohei came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself. My cousin was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river. Xiaohei barked and immediately jumped into the water. Hearing about him barking, my aunt hurried there and saw Xiaohei swimming towards the bank carrying my cousin. She was very concerning about them. Final, Xiaohei did all he could to save my cousin, that moved all of us. Everyone praised Xiaohei for its brave and kindness.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:吧多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The train left lately that night and arrived in Montreal at dawn the next morning. At the station, people everywhere was speaking French. There were signs and ads in the French, but some of them had English words in smaller letter. “We don’t leave until this evening,” said Liu Qian. “Let’s going downtown. Old Montreal is close the water.” They spend the afternoon in lovely shops but visiting artists in their workplaces beside the water. As they sat in a buffet restaurant looked over the broad St Lawrence River, a young man sat down with us.
I found a wallet a couple of weeks ago in the car, where I was renting. The wallet had credit cards but quite a bit of cash inside. The gentleman it was belonged to happened to be celebrating his birthday that same day. I was able to mail him his wallet. A few weeks later I receive this. “Jamie, I can’t tell you how fortunately I felt when I received my wallet sending by you. It is rare that someone can return a wallet, let alone return with 100% of its content. I’ll be thankful for you forever.” Tears filled my eye when I finished reading a note.
增加:在缺词处加-一个漏字符号( ∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一-横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In general, our houseparents are annoyed for boys students in dormitories. I didn't begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week. I was asleep when my alarm clock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces. After the while, the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in. Instead blaming me, he asked me anxious what was going on. Before making sure I was OK, he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself. Since then, I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents. They are like our parents, kept all of us safe.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!