The best advice I was received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he encouraged me to participate a speech competition. So I signed up and before the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. And the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like a battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks to his advice, I never give up while I do anything.
On September 5, the students in our class paid a visit to the China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00, we left the China Science and Technology Museum by the school bus.At 8：30, a guide introduced it to us brief and told us that we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes late, we were divided into five groups and begin our visits separately.Some student took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were amazing at the great achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30, we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my horizons but also aroused my interest in study science and technology.
Last week, I visited the Beach Park with two of my friend, Tom and Jack. I learned a lot about starfish, which name comes from their shape. As a matter of the fact, they're not fish, though they started their lives in water pools by the seashore. They can take care themselves even when they are young. Young starfish know what to eat. Some starfish can later live deeply in the sea, though they can't swim. They move by use their legs and feet. The starfish has no head and tail, and just has five legs. If a leg fall off, it will grow right back. The amazed starfish has now become my favorite animal.
Two weeks before my wife's birthday, I telephone some of her friends from university and requested that they send the video, wishing her a "Happy Birthday". I asked them to tell the pleasant memories they had during his university days. I received seven videos from the friends she had not been in touch for eight years! Many of them described fun memory from university and talked about that how much they missed those times. Before I showed the videos to my wife on her birthday, she could not stop smile. She was very happy but I saw tears of happiness in her eyes. A simple action made her birthday specially by connecting her to old friends.
On a cold winter afternoon, I bought some vegetable and fruit at a shop. The man in front of me was paying the bill and found that he didn’t have enough money. The cashier asked him return some of the selected items. The man tried to persuade the cashier that he would pay the bill late. But the cashier couldn’t help with him. It seemed that he had to give up that he wanted. I took out 20 yuan. He hesitated to take them away from a stranger. I gave him a sweetly smile and said, “Come on. This is how it’s spread around the world.” He accepted my offer and give me another smile. Out of a shop, the weather was very cold, and my heart was warm.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I always dreamed traveling on my own. But my parents worried about me all the time. They thought I might have trouble solve the problems I met. In order to comfort him ,I decided to travel with a friend and they agreed. It take me just two minutes to book two train ticket from my hometown to Nanjing, paying with Alipay. I also downloaded an app which was using to help me find the hotel easy. We spent several days in Nanjing and visited the number of old museums, that contained many beautiful paintings. Although this was the first time that I had left home, but I really had a good time.
One day, I was studying at home while I heard a loud noise. I went out to see what had happened. What I saw made me scaring. A building was on the fire. Some people were using water put out the fire. A few people jumped out of the window. Besides, those which were still on the second floor were crying for help. The people outside don’t know how to help them. Firefighters arrived at last and we fought the fire bravely. Then the people inside was taken out. They were serious injured and were taken to the hospital at once.
Thanks to the firefighters, the people were saved and the fire was put out at the end.
Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited for a bus come at a stop.30 minutes passed，but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience.
My cousin George and I went on a trip to my uncle yesterday. We were riding along a hillside while suddenly some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes. George’s legs got seriously injure and so did mine. We couldn’t move a bit. Lucky, I saw some farmers ahead. Wave our hands, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received medical treatment in time. Although we don’t know their name, we feel they are like our dear big brothers and sisters.
It was on Sunday so I didn’t have to go to school as usual. My parents went to the countryside to see my grandparents, left me alone. After finishing my homeworks, I began to play football at home. All of sudden, I kicked the ball so hardly that it flew right onto a vase and broke it. It was a great favorite of my mother’s. I decided to tell my parents it was the fault of the cat for fear that she might punish me. Therefore, when they got home, I hesitated for a moment and told them that truly happened. Instead of punishing me, they just hope that I would never make so a foolish mistake again.
