增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something amazing last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavy but we had a very important relative to visit, who lived in a distant mountain village. They had to take risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, and we arrived safely. A family welcomed us warmly. We treated with a good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after say goodbye, we start to return home. Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and couldn’t move. Just now, my father saw two villager walking by. They offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, I got up at six as usual. After a quickly breakfast, I went to the gym to work out. I spent two hours take exercise there. Then I took shower in a bathhouse, where is very close to my school. While I was walking on the street, I notice an old lady who didn’t look well. When she saw me, she signed to me and asked that I could take her home. At first, I was hesitated for a minute but then decided to give her a hand. About twenty minute later, we arrived at the apartment. She was grateful for me and invited me to her home. I polite refused and left.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, my son worked hard to earn enough money to buy him a new racingbicycle instead of asking for money from me. I loved my son so very much that I bought him a pair of sunglasses and gloves.
On November 10th, my birthday, I found the beautiful guitar on the table, beside that was a card, saying, “Happy birthday to my wonderful mother.” I was surprising and tears streamed down my face. I remembered once I joke to my family that I wanted to learn how to play guitar to make my life wonderful. I had forgotten it, and my son remembered. He took it serious, and bought me one as a birthday gift. After wondering how my son could buy the expensive gifts, I realized that my son had sold his racingbicycle to get me the guitar.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词2.只允许修改10处,从第11处起)不计分。
Last winter my dog, Anne and I go to the Arctic Hill. It was covered with ice, what made it very interested to slide(滑行) down. Anne did a trick with her tail. I turned around three times before I reached the bottom(底部)! Some young boys were watched us slide. We wanted to slide down too. Then I came up a good idea. I asked Anne that she would agree.
We played at the bottom of the hill but when the young boys slid down, we flew right into the softly and safe places. In this way everyone had a fun.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
My classmate Han Mei and I went to the Palace Museum by taxi on last Saturday. On arrival, I reached for my mobile phone, and I couldn’t find it anywhere. Han Mei thought I might have left it in the taxi. Immediate she dialed my number and a taxi driver answered it. He said my mobile phone has been left on the back seat of his car and he would drive back to return them. Twenty minute later, when the driver handed me the phone, I was too grateful that I offered him an extra fee. But he refused with a smile, say that he was very pleasing to have helped me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I asked my dad if I had ever made him cry ago.He said,“Once.”He told me that on my first birthday,he laid out a pen,a dollar and a toy in front me.He wanted to see that I would pick.I think that a lot of Chinese people to do that. It represents what you'll value most in grow up. For examples,the pen is intelligence,money is wealth,and the toy is fun.To his surprised,l just sat there and stared at the items.After the while,l pushed everything aside and went right into his arms.He didn't realize that he is one of the choices.And that was the first,and the only time that I had made her cry.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once, as Zengzi’s wife was going shopping, her son insisted in going with her, making a tearful scene However, she promised the child that she would kill their pig to treat her after she returned home. When the wife came back, she found Zengz preparing to kill a pig. She hurriedly stopped him, saying, “I am kidding the child.” Zengz told her, “You cannot lie to a child. Since they are young and have no social experience, they follow which their parents tell them. If you lie to them, you are actually teaching them lie to others like that.” As children’s first teacher, parents will significant influence their children. And children can not be well educated only when their parents behave well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was a high school student then, from the low-income family. So I have to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do my homework. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. But what I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I learned from school.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was rainy yesterday. My friend Diana and Molly invited me to dinner. I put on my red jacket and black shoes. I didn't forget to taking a gift. The house was not far so I went on the foot. They were surprising when I arrived. They didn't expect my visit because the terrible weather. They thank me for some chocolate. After dinner, while we were drinking our orange juice or chatting, my friends' parents were watching our favorite comedy show. Sudden, we heard a noise coming from the kitchen. It was their small cat which fell on the ground and broke a bowl.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to Shapotou in last weekend. Having told about the history of Ning Xia, he was amazing at this wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the mixture of sand and water. I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for her. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activities of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign his name. Both Shapotou and the Ning Xia people deep impressed him so he decided to visit more places of interest when free.