增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday, I learned a lesson about tell lies. Early in the morning, I didn’t want to go to the school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off from work to look me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the truth. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit me. I felt so regretfully. Finally, I admitted I had lain and promised never to do them again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of a old woman with a walking stick lie on the ground. Quick I ran over to help her up and asked her that was wrong with her. She told me she slipped and fell because heart trouble. I was worried and decide to take her to a hospital nearby. And then I contacted my family. Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital. I told them some informations about the incident. They thanked and praised me for my kindness. Although I was late for school today, but I felt very proud of what I have done.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last term our class hold a meaningful activity which required us to form the good habit in100 days.I paired up with my deskmate.First,we discussed what habit that we would develop. All of us agreed to read for half an hour each day.Then we made a list of the books we were interested.From then on,we managed to spare half an hour every day to reading books,how busy we were.Besides,we took a lot of notes and often exchanged idea.In the end,we accomplished our goal of reading for 100 days.How proudly we were! More importantly,due to the activity,reading books have become an essential part of our life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man stops at a flower shop to order some flowers to be wired to his mother who lived two hundreds miles away. As he got out his car, he noticed a little girl sobbing there. When ask why, she said, “I want to buy a rose for my mother, and I have no money.” The man bought a rose for the girl. As they were leaving he offered the girl the ride home. But the girl directed him to a cemetery, when she placed the rose on a fresh dug grave (坟墓). The man returned to the flower shop, and canceled the wire order, picked up a bouquet and driving to his mother’s house.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday,I went on journey by train.There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat.Many people had to stand,which was really tired.I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable.In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids.With the kid squeezing into their single seat,she had to stand up all the way.So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her.The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness.Seeing her beautiful smile,I also smiled.Share increased happiness!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On December 30,after two weeks’training,we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum.During the first two weeks,I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks.In order to do good in the work,my teammates and I made fully preparations.We first worked out a careful plan.Then we practiced use proper body language to explain the artworks better.The month-long volunteer work has now come to end,from what I understand that it isn’t easy to be a good guide.Besides.I also realize that how important teamwork is.I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One afternoon in February, my classmates and I was on the way to the cinema. Suddenly an old woman falls down heavily due to the ground covering with thick ice. Seeing what had happened. We dialed 120 without a second thought. On such cold weather, we stayed with her until the ambulance came to scene. And then they left for the cinema. Although we were later for the film, we all thought it was worthwhile. After all, help people in need is a good way to obtain joy and happy. Now we all remember the day which we spent it together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I don’t remember exact how old I was when I began to ride a bike. I only remembered how I practiced riding a bike in early years. When I first successfully rode a bike, that remains a vivid memory, my brother helped me with holding the back seat of the bike when I was riding. “Wow, I did it!” cried I, as soon as he noticed I was riding without his hands hold it! I learnt quickly, and soon, even though my feet were not touching the ground, but I was able to cycle around six kilometer a day to school! It’s so lovely to remember which happened at that time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly. I was at the Shanghai Railway Station, buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone has stolen it. Unluckily, I had all my money in my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It was very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend, he lent me lots of clothes. I felt very happy about that I could change my clothes at last.