增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除:把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the aim of enriching our school life, our school hold a chorus competition last week. Our teacher encouraged us take an active part in the activity. Late, we carried out a heated discussion to select songs. Finally all student in our class agreed on sing “Defending Yellow River” in the competition. In the chorus, we sang with full of passion under the direction of our conductor. Which excited us most was that we won a first prize. During the competition, not only were we proud of us triumph, but also deep impressed by the meaning of cooperation.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to promote participation in outdoor exercise, our school organized an activity to climb Mount Tai last Sunday. The majority of my classmates joined the activity. Early in the morning, we gathered outside the school gate and head for Mount Tai. We were in high spirits when the moment we arrived at the foot of the mountain. In a course of the climb, we cooperated with each other and eventually we reached the summit, which we enjoyed the bright sunshine and fresh air. Viewing from the top, the city was beautiful. There we entertained us with stories, songs, dances and game. This event was extreme beneficial. Therefore, we strongly suggest that similar events are held every year!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school is to organize English essay competition on the theme “Good habits and success”. We welcome students as well as teachers to submit your essay on the giving topic. Here are the requirements.
First, your essay must focus at your understanding of good habits and how they have led to your success, especially your academic success. Then, you were expected to support your views with concrete personal experiences or stories, what will make your essay more readable and convincing. Final, your essay should be no more than 500 word. And please send them to essaycontest@163.com no late than December 1st. Why not to pick up your pen and share your most touching moment with us?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School, whom you helped me during my preparation for the English speech contest last month. So I’m writing to express my grateful.
Your classes were unforgettable, that not only could I learn much knowledge on speech but I had a lot of funs. You were always listen to my speech carefully no matter what many mistakes I made. Above all, you helped me to correct these mistakes with patience. With your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize.
What a hugely influence you had on me. I’m determining to work hard at my study in order be a useful person who can make a contribution to our country and society.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,
How is everything going with you? I am writing to invite you to the graduation party in our school hall from 2 pm to 5 pm in June 12.
The graduation party is a tradition for us to celebrate end of our school life and thanks our teachers and classmates. First the headmaster will give us a graduation speech to the people present and deliver his best wishes to the graduate. Then our school band will give a living show, followed by various performances included singing, dancing and cross talk. Finally, you will play games and take some photos.
It is hope that you can accept my invitation without hesitation. I am convinced if you will have a joyful day.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday afternoon, my best friend and I visited art exhibition with the theme of traditionally Chinese paintings in the hall on the second floor of the school library.
The exhibition opens from 3: 00 to 5: 00 every afternoon in this month. A huge number of works painting by students are on display. Among they are paintings on birds, flowers and shrimps. They are very vivid that I can hardly tell that they are living or just painted. The exhibition not only widens my knowledges about Chinese culture, but also enrich my after-class life.
To have a good understanding of Chinese culture than before, you’d better grasp this opportunity!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the afternoon of last Friday, the English speech competition, organized by our English club, was held in our meeting hall. It begun at 3:00 p.m. and Mr. Lee, our leading English teacher, gave an inspired opening speech. Then two students started to host the competition with both English and Chinese. Fifteen students were attended the competition and each gave an excellent English speech. If the competition finished, the competitors were ranked and prizes were presented to the first sixth speakers. The competition has received positively comments from students and teachers. They both believed that it could encourage more students show interest in English learning.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Li Hua. Today I was honored to represent us graduates to deliver a speech.
Firstly, I’d like to express our heartfelt thanks to the help offering by our teachers. Without your guidance and encourage, we couldn’t have made such a great progress. Now we have not only had a good command of all the subjects, also learned how to get along good with each other and how to be a responsible person. How a good time! To repay you, we should work much hard to serve the people and society better in the future. Next, as for my friends, I sincerely hope that you will make great achievements in your future life and career.
Thanks again. I wish all of you could realize you dreams.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our class organized a cooking show to improve students living skills. We were told to learn to cook a dish or share the experience with classmates. That evening when I turned to Mom for help. She suggested making steamed fish since it was easy for her to cook. Under Mom’s carefully guidance, I succeeded. My father recorded whole process at the same time. My parent praised me for the wonderful color and smell of the dish. Seeing them enjoy it, I feel overjoyed. The next day, I shared my cooking experience with the class meeting, as well as the happiness gaining from cooking for families.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, sixty students from our school pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum.
The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covers area of 48,000 square meters. The instant when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover, we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed for us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.
Though the visiting time was slight short, we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.