增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, I studied in Ireland and made many friends from different countries. Yesterday, I receive a letter from a Spanish friend, which brought back my memories of studying in Ireland. She told me about some of the other people I met them in Ireland. She also said that two of my other friend would write to me from Italy. I felt happily and lucky because I made the lot of good friends when I was in Ireland. It was really interested for me to meet people from so much different countries. I think that we not only improved our English, but also got know people from all over the world and this is of great important. I will never forget this experience which influence on me is for life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Neighborhood does help. Six years before, at the hottest day of the year, I saw man working on the grass at the bank next door. I didn’t know him, and I decided to do something kind. I went in the house, take a Cola from my fridge and returned outside. Then I stood at the place that he could see me. I held up the drink and pointed to her. He nodded. When he came to accept the bottle from me, he thanked me immediate. He said that he was thinking about get something to drink.
He has helped me a lot of since then. He gives me advices whenever I need help.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show. I am told that you are in low spirit and I understand what you feel. However, I think you should cheer up.
You have tried your best, so there is nothing regret. And have you noticed that you have made a great progress in Chinese and singing since you take part in the talent show? This is what you have gained and what real matters. What's more, it's common of us to experience failure, that will encourage us to go further. Keeping on trying and you will succeed sooner and later.
I wish you happiness every day.
The good communication between parents and children are very important. If we don't communicate with our parents proper, we may find it difficulty to get their support when we are in need of help. How should we do to improve our communication with our parents? Firstly, we should listen to our parents patiently when they give us advices. Their advice can serve as short cut to solve your problems. Secondly, we should be honest with our parents. If we disagree with them, we should let them to know. Last but not least, we should always trusted our parents and see them as our friends. It is always easy for us to communicating with friends.
In our daily life, if we want to do our work good, we must learn what to work together with others. Working together can save us time and energy. Beside, we can learn much from our partners by working with them.
Work with those we like can be joy. We can share pleasure and sad with them. But it challenged us to work with people we dislike. In such situation, just pay attention on the work itself. Perhaps by working together for a long time, we’ll find it that they are easy to get along with.
7 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 5处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改5处,多者(从第6处起)不计分。
Last week I paid a visit to Mr. Yang, that was my former neighbor. He and I used to live next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, we were told that the old building, along with many other similar things, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to move away because it. The only problem was that it takes quite a long time for him to reach to the downtown area. However, Mr. Yang didn’t seem to worry about the long distance.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词:
It seems that everyone is possible to be misunderstood for some reason. I am no exception. One day after school, I got on my bike and start heading home. I was just about to get out of the traffic jam outside our school while a woman stopped me, claim that my bike had scratched her car. I felt confused because that I clearly remembered that I was trying to avoid touching his car just now. Therefore, she insisted on blaming me and gradually rose her voice. Surrounded by a crowd of people, I got anxiously and desperately wanted this to be over. So I made a compromise.
Never before in my life I dealt with such a thing, and I was apparently taken advantage of. Now I am aware that I should never give in as long as I am on the right side.