增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer I was taking a train to Taiyuan when I had noticed that the carriage was noisy and filled with people.
Before long, a train conductor comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his succeed.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could all show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon,but I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street. I happened to see an accident. A little girl was hurt but her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed there for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all rightly. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope your understand.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years ago,I was chosen by my classmate to take part an English speech competition.When go up to the stage,I felt nervous.At the once,my mother's words came to me,"If you want to succeed,it costs nothing and self-confidence."Since I had the chance to standing here,it meant that I had the ability.I said to myself,"Have you forgotten that you have prepared for this competition for a longer time?You are the best."Strange,my nervousness disappeared.I spoke very fluently that all the audience cheers after my speech.I was successful!