增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher，Anna. When we arrived， we made a camp fire first. Then，Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright . We all sat around the fire ， listening Anna's stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn't sleep the whole night，thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home，I said to my parents，“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future. ”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, my most favorite dream job is becoming a doctor, that has been my dream since my early age. My father is the doctor and he is very busy to be with me. So I am not sad because what he did is highly thought of by his patients. I hope to be a person like him and devote my life to help others. I know this is not easy to reach my goal. The only thing I can do is to study hard and prepare myself with rich knowledges. What about your dream? Looking forward your early reply.
