增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My dream is to become school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children’s growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave them. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. But to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever because I’ll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher，Anna. When we arrived， we made a camp fire first. Then，Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright . We all sat around the fire ， listening Anna's stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn't sleep the whole night，thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home，I said to my parents，“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future. ”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a student, my most favorite dream job is becoming a doctor, that has been my dream since my early age. My father is the doctor and he is very busy to be with me. So I am not sad because what he did is highly thought of by his patients. I hope to be a person like him and devote my life to help others. I know this is not easy to reach my goal. The only thing I can do is to study hard and prepare myself with rich knowledges. What about your dream? Looking forward your early reply.
