增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher,Anna. When we arrived, we made a camp fire first. Then,Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night. I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright . We all sat around the fire , listening Anna's stories about her childhood. She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldn't sleep the whole night,thought about being a teacher in the future. When I get home,I said to my parents,“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future. ”