增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I enjoy learn English and can remember words easily. However, when it come to reading comprehension, it’s really a challenge. In order improve my reading I tried to read a storybook written in English on last Sunday. At first, I refer to the dictionary every time I came across a new word, which I found not very helpful. I often felt puzzling about what I had read. Then I tried to finish a chapter completely without looking up the new words. How surprised me was that I could understand the story well. I’m satisfied that now I have a good way to learn English than before. I hope I will make great progresses in English in a way.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Although autumn leaves are very beauty all around the world, the colorful leaves in Beijing’s Xiangshan Park is really unique. The explosion of colors across the park is an amazed sight that only Mother Nature can provide. The fall scenery of the park never disappoints and pretty sights can be found everywhere, regardless the weather.
Each autumn, people in Beijing will squeeze in their last gatherings in the park after winter settles in. It is a perfect season for outdoor exploration with some of their friend. Visitors will took off their jackets at the noon as the sun shines brightly in the sky. They will ride bikes, or walk along the parkways that offer him a chance to take in the sights before they are sending back indoors until spring.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something amazing last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavy but we had a very important relative to visit, who lived in a distant mountain village. They had to take risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, and we arrived safely. A family welcomed us warmly. We treated with a good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after say goodbye, we start to return home. Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and couldn’t move. Just now, my father saw two villager walking by. They offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love my family very much. Included me, there are four people in my family: dad, mom, and his elder sister. We also have the puppy, its name is Candy.
In my family, I love Candy better. Because my dad and my mom do not have time to play me, and my elder sister had to go to school, I always talk to Candy when they are in. I hope my dad and mom will not be so busily that they will have more times to stay at home. I think Candy also wants to them to stay at home.
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
In your last letter, you tell me that you got fat and didn’t enjoy good health, that made me worried. Now I want to give you some way to keep fit. I think doing exercise and keeping a balanced diet is important for our health. Doing exercise is not necessary for us. It is helpful to keep fit and get their body and mood ready to a busy day. A balanced diet means a lot to good health because it is wise to eat nutritious food. And the sooner we develop a good eating habit, the good it is. I’d like you take what I said into consideration.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I always make sure of I won’t take any stress or worry into exams. Instead, I try to show the highest positive spirits because my classmates also become positive. I did a same thing last Friday. I wasn’t well prepared with an upcoming chemistry exam and didn’t know how it would go. However, I decided to do whatever made me feeling happy and spread joy around as usually. I went to school and saw everyone was worried, so I told some jokes make a light environment. The way I told the jokes change everything and all my classmates soon felt relaxing. As a result, we did well in the exams.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I’m Li Hua,How are you going these days? As you know, there are various destination of cultural heritage in China. Yet the one I like better for visiting is Mogao Caves. The reasons for my choice is as follows.
Mogao Caves are located at a key point along the Silk Route, that is the crossroads of trade as well religious, cultural and intellectual influences. Mogao are distinguishing for their statues and wall paintings, spanned 1,000 years of Buddhist art with an unmatched historical value. It’s a appealing place that you won’t miss it. It’s really worth visiting and I’m extreme looking forward to visiting it soon.
Yours.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors. Also, I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Max is one of my good friend. I first met him two years ago when he knocks on my door. “Hello,” he said warm and sincerely. “My name is Max, and I’ve just moved in next door, so I’m your new neighbor.” Max is quite tall or thin with brown eyes and black hair. He likes sports and is fond of wear sports clothes. Beside, he has a great sense of humor. I love to listen his interesting stories. What’s more, he is a very kind-hearted person, and is always ready to help people in the need. All in all, life is never bored when Max is around. Who wouldn’t be happier to have him as a friend and neighbor?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8:00 a.m., we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!
