增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? I’d like to invite you a music festival to be held the next Sunday morning in our school hall.
The music festival would last four hours in total. It will have many excellent performances, including some traditional music pieces playing with Chinese instruments, like pipa, guzheng or erhu. In addition, some traditional Chinese dances will be performed by student. What’s more important is that some famous Chinese musicians will show off to perform. Since Chinese music is something which makes you crazy, I’m sure you will have fun if you can come.
Looking forward to our coming and hoping we can see your wonderfully performances.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I was on my way home after doing some shoppings in a supermarket. I stood on the road side and watched the traffic careful. When I saw it was safe, I begin to cross the road. All of sudden, a motorbike came over knocking me down but my things went all over. Thankfully, he was driving slowly and I had my leg injure a little. The driver apologized to me and called a taxi to send me to the nearer hospital in the town. I visited to a doctor on duty, and I was told there was something serious. The motorbike driver insisted on my paying the money for my medical examination, but I refused.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I came across a article about a doctor called Lin Qiaozhi by chance. One of her books explains how to cut the death rate from having and caring for babies caught my eye. Then I do some research by raising some question about her. Further reading made me to realize it was hard work and determined as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school. That made her succeed was her kindness and consideration. He often went lately at night to deliver a baby for a poor family. I was excited and wanted to carry her career.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day’s study.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My dream is to become school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children’s growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave them. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. But to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever because I’ll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two months before we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa and began to watch TV. Later, Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realized that Sam has arranged the dinner for purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smile at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I asked my dad if I had ever made him cry ago.He said,“Once.”He told me that on my first birthday,he laid out a pen,a dollar and a toy in front me.He wanted to see that I would pick.I think that a lot of Chinese people to do that. It represents what you'll value most in grow up. For examples,the pen is intelligence,money is wealth,and the toy is fun.To his surprised,l just sat there and stared at the items.After the while,l pushed everything aside and went right into his arms.He didn't realize that he is one of the choices.And that was the first,and the only time that I had made her cry.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit surprised when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassing and didn't know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask I to make up with Bill. Until then I don't realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. I went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happy and talked with me excited. That night, we had a great fun together.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jane,
Hello, Jane. I want to tell you anything about my trip. Yesterday it was sun and a little windy. I went to a park for a trip with my classmates. Since a park is far away, we took a bus to there. What beautiful the park was! We swam in the pool then played volleyball. We took a lot of food and eat it for lunch under a big tree. Then we listened to musics and had a rest. In the afternoon, we went fish and took lots of photos. Both of us had a great time in the park.
Yours,
Gina
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every day I go to school by bike. In my opinion, cycling is an environmental friendly form of transport. It is also a good way to exercise, from whom I benefit a lot. Besides, it can give me many chances to experienced love and kindness. Yesterday one such thing had happened to me. It was on my way to school that something was wrong with my bike. I didn’t know how to do. Just then a passer-by volunteer to have it repaired. I offered himself some money in return his help. He refused, saying help others was what he should do. Hearing his word, I was deeply moved and decided to pass it on.
