增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As a Chinese who is particular interested in Chinese Red Classic Stories, I would like to introduce the Victory over Japan Day on September 3.
September 3 is set as the memory day to celebrate the victory of the Anti-Japanese War and memorize the brave soldiers who lost their life in the war. Additionally, it was the struggle and sacrifices of that generation which saved China. So it was significant for the Chinese, especially for our teenagers. In my view, we should devote all our energies to study to prepare ourselves to build a good China. And only in this way China stand among the great powers of the world and make contributions to a world peace.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday I took my brother to a Father’s Day event in the city library. We quickly checked in and found two seat. At beginning, a lady shared a popular origin of Father’s Day with us. A few minutes late, she told a true story. It’s about a selfish father who sacrificed herself in the flood for the life of his daughter. It moved to us deeply. Finally, she gave each of us a bag of colored paper or taught us what to make a beautiful card. On received the gift, my father say nothing but gave us a big hug, with tears rolling down.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, I visited Luoyang but met a kind and caring guide, who left the deep impression on me. In the way, she told us a lot about this old city. Not only we know about the city, but we were invited to eat various special snack. Unfortunately, I got my left foot seriously injuring. It was horrible painful when I walked. Seeing I have difficulty walking, she came to my assistance. Accompanied by her, I returned back to the bus to wait for other tourists. I was really grateful for his kindness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在右边横线上写出改正后的词。
1. Tell him come tomorrow, OK?
2. The bus is coming. Be careful when you get off the bus.
3. Work out regularly is good for your health.
4. We are making progress because of he helps us a lot.
5. I’m fond of play the piano.
6. My mother asked me to buy two knifes in the shop.
7. China is very larger than Japan.
8. He said him didn’t like the surprise.
9. The classroom in that we study is very large.
10. Don’t talk to anyone about the bad news — especial not my brother.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have watched a plenty of documentaries about Shanghai and I had been dying to go there. If I have a chance to go sightseeing there, I’ll make a detailed plan based on my knowledge about the city. I’ll walk along the Bund, which I can see many western-style buildings. For lunch, we would like to eat some delicious snack in Yu Garden. After lunch, I plan to visit the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, which is the seventh high tower in the world. Besides, I will also climb to the top of that tower to have a view of the whole modernly city. Only by this way can I have better understanding of it. I hope my wish to visit Shanghai will be realizing this year.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
1. I asked him lend me twenty pounds.
2. Bill works hard than Joe.
3. To they surprise, the precious parcel was full of stones and sand.
4. The instrument is bought by my grandfather many years ago.
5. It was made in Germany in the 1681.
1. First, I think I should go over all the things which my teaches taught me in the previous term.
2. At the school that she worked, a lot of students were poor.
3. I live next door to a couple who children often make a lot of noise.
4. One evening we were having a party while the phone rang.
5. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When it come to the ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, fall on June 8th, is aimed at raising aware of preserving the ocean.
The ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offered us sufficient food, and it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is crucial for us preserve the ocean. First of all, place importance in our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into the ocean.
What’s the more, we can also hand out booklets to call on more people to preserve the ocean. The more people are involved, the good the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to preserving the ocean. To preserve the ocean is to protect ourself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How are you recently, my dear friend? Now I will told you something about my English teacher, Mr. Lee.
Mr. Lee is forty years old. He lives the city. And she usually goes to visit his wife’s parents in the countryside with his family. He’s outgoing and gets along good with us students. His classes are very interested. After class, he often helps us with our English. He never smokes. He is good at sports. It is said that he have kept swimming for 20 years. He likes playing the chess. My classmates like him and both think he is one of the greater teachers in the world. Do you want to introducing me something about your teacher?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day when we were playing the basketball, I saw Tim wearing a pair sneaker of my style. I thought they were my shoes, so I shouted angry and blamed him for using my personal possessions without permit. Then I went back to the dorm after he could say anything. I opened the door only to find mine own sneakers just under my bed. For a while, I stood there still, shocking and guilty. When realizing my act must have hurt him, immediately I rush to the court to apology to him sincerely. Fortunately, though he was angry and sad, he pardoned me. With my relief, the conflict ended happily.
