注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The person I would like to interview him is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only one of the greatest astronaut in the world but also the first Chinese go to space. I have long been interesting in space exploration. And I believe I could learn a greatly deal from him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him that made him become an astronaut or how he was trained. I would also like to know how he feel in space and whether space travel is as exciting as what is describing in some books. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about their personal life, which must be very different.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(___)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, my parents expected me to being a successful person with well-paid job. Therefore, what I value most is a sense of achievement. Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache. I thought if I am a doctor, I would ease his pain. Then as I growing up, I came across Lin Qiaozhi’s story. It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination. Why not carry on her career? Undoubtedly, being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yuan Longping is known for the father of hybrid rice. He devotes his life to make not only China but also the world free from hunger. He has two dreams. One is to enjoy the cool under the rice tree. The other is that his hybrid rice can be grown global. But turning dreams into reality are hard to achieve, what takes a lot of time and efforts. For me, my dream is to be English teacher. I wish to spread this story of some Chinese heroes to the world. And I wish my students can value food or be grateful to Yuan Longping as well. In order to make my dream came true, all the things I have to do it are to work hard.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(ʌ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was child, my parents expected me to being a successful person with a well-paid job. Therefore, what I value most is a sense of achievement. Since my childhood, I have dreamed of being a doctor.
The idea occurs to me for the first time when I saw my grandfather to suffer from a severe headache. I thought if I am a doctor, I would ease his pain. Then as I growing up, I came across Lin Qiaozhi’s story. It was her perseverance and selfless devotion what strengthened my determination. Why not carry on her career? Undoubtedly, being a qualified doctor is far from easy.
I will study hardly and make non-stop efforts to pursue her dream and help people in need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dream is important in our life. It encouraged us to fight for the future. My dream is to be a English teacher. I am grateful to all my teacher. They teach me not only knowledge, also how to adapt themselves to the society. Therefore, I want to be a teacher which is useful to his students. To be a good English teacher, I need to study hardly and learn English well. Then I need to practice my spoken English by communicating with my classmates on English. All in all, I believe my dream will to come true and I will try my better to achieve my dream.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
My burning ambition is to set off an English Writing Club to enrich our school life.
Whatever the difficulties I might encounter, I think they are really nothing comparing to my passion. They will devote myself entirely to establish the club. The club will extend a warm welcome to those are interested in English writing. The members will be scheduled to meet every other weeks on Sunday afternoon, during which professional writers were going to be invited occasionally to give talks on English writing.
Though the club is benefit to our English writing, it is not guarantee that we will achieve high scores in the English text.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a dream that one day I could be the pianist. I dream of play a sweet piece of music for those who need music, bringing happiness for other. I love music and I love the feel of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the musical sounds, the beautiful but powerful sound a piano makes impresses me much. It’s clear I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practice for two hours every day if time permitted and learn as many songs as I can. I will put down my heart into my dream and never give up. I am confidence that one day my dream will come true.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I am a little kid, I have decided to become a policeman, whose uniform is so coolly. As time goes through, I gradually become aware of the great contributions made by the police, that give me a deep sense of responsibility in my heart. Each time I see the police, I am being encouraged a lot by my dream. To realize dream, I have to be fit by keeping a healthy diet and do exercise regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses in my studies. Although it is not easy to being a policeman, I’ll never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Past Jack,
Hi! I’m Jack, your future self! First, I’m sorry to say I may be differ from what you have ever imagined. I am now suffering from lung cancer, it is mainly caused by smoking. I am much thin than before. When I was a teenager, I told my father that I will not smoke like him. However, I completely forgot his promise. Some boys persuaded me have a try, and gradual I became addicted to cigarettes. Smoke cigarettes changed my daily routine. I felt sleepy and weak without cigarettes. I wasn’t a adorable boy any more. I’m writing to you from the future, hope that you will reject all the bad habits!
Future Jack
