增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I accompanied my grandma with acupuncture (针灸). As she has been suffering some health issues, she decided to try this traditional Chinese medical treatments. The acupuncturist greeted us warmly and asked about my grandma’s symptoms while we arrived at the clinic. After a thoroughly examination, he explains the process and benefits of acupuncture. My grandma was a bit nervous so I held her hands calm her. After the session, my grandma felt a sense of relief. The acupuncturist told her to rest and drink a plenty of water. We thanked him for his care and left the clinic. While walking back home, my grandma shared his experience with me, express the admiration for the magic of acupuncture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I`m so sorry to hear that you have been suffering from sleepless for a long time. To help your recover soon, I'd like to advise you to turn to traditional Chinese medicine.
As is known to us all, traditional Chinese medicine is practical but effective when using to treat some diseases. Compared with the high cost of western medicine, it has a reasonable price, so you don't need to be worried your budget. Additional, unlike western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine has more side effects. In the consequence, if you agree, I'd like to recommend a doctor to you, which I'm sure will offer you an ideal treatment. Please don't hesitate to ask me for help whenever you think it's necessary. I hope you would have a speedy recovery soon.