增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I discover I couldn't move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture(针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by since I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I’m greatly honouring to share with you about my opinion of further my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) at that famous university.
With history of over 2000 years, TCM is wide known for it has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness. Generations of Chinese people as well as foreigners benefit from them. I feel really pride whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather to leave the clinics with satisfaction and hope. Just like me, many classmates of mine have made up their mind to succeed traditional Chinese doctors’ career and majored in TCM to become doctors. I believe it’ll turn up an excellent cause for me to pursue.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m so sorry to hear that you had been suffering from sleeplessness for a long time. To help you recover soon, I’d like to advise you to turn on to traditional Chinese medicine.
As is known to us, traditional Chinese medicine is practical but effective when used to treat some diseases. Comparing with the high cost of western medicine, it has reasonable price, so you don’t need to be worried about your budget. Additional, unlike western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine has few side effects. If you agree, I’d like to recommend a doctor to you, which I’m sure will offer you an ideal treatment. Please don’t hesitate to ask me for help unless you think it’s necessary. I hope you would have a speedy recovery soon.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was feeling little sick the other day. I decided to visit my doctor before things got bad. I called her and made an appointment at 9:30 a. m. When I arrived at his office, a nurse took me to one of their examination room. She took my temperature or blood pressure. Then I waited until the doctor came in. After looked me over carefully and asking a few questions patient, the doctor told me that I had a bad cold. She give me some medicine that I was supposed to taking three times a day. After the examination, I went to the reception area and paid for the bill.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Among the things what have happened to me, there is one that I will never forget.
One Saturday, I invited Eric my house. Unfortunate, I was bitten by my dog. Then the wound started to bleed. After apply pressure to the area with a clean bandage, Eric cleaned my wound with soap and water under running water for at least 5 minute. Therefore, the wound didn’t stop bleeding after 10 minutes of direct pressure. At that urgent moment, he send me to the nearest hospital for further treatment. The doctor thought highly of my action.
I was so grateful to him. And from this unforgettable experience, I realized the important of first aid. So, to help myself out and save others, I have learned some knowledge about first aid after that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I discover I couldn’t move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture (针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by after I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I`m so sorry to hear that you have been suffering from sleepless for a long time. To help your recover soon, I'd like to advise you to turn to traditional Chinese medicine.
As is known to us all, traditional Chinese medicine is practical but effective when using to treat some diseases. Compared with the high cost of western medicine, it has a reasonable price, so you don't need to be worried your budget. Additional, unlike western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine has more side effects. In the consequence, if you agree, I'd like to recommend a doctor to you, which I'm sure will offer you an ideal treatment. Please don't hesitate to ask me for help whenever you think it's necessary. I hope you would have a speedy recovery soon.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
I have been delighting that finally a summer camp will be organize during the last week of the summer vacation. The camp includes various course such as cooking, swimming and giving first aid. I plan to sign up the course of giving first aid.
I choose to attend the course due to the fact that first aid is greatly important to people. If a person gets injured and need urgent medical care before a doctor arrives, every second counts, in that case giving first aid can even help save life. Nowadays, more and more people have realized what important first aid is.
Besides, I plan to study the medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopeful, the course will help them learn more medical knowledge to deal with emergencies.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I live alone in a rented room. A few days ago, I had serious headache. I had no friends near me who could take care of me, that made me very scared. So I texted my English teacher and asked for her kindly help. She visited to me soon later and took me to the hospital immediately. Give me some medicine, the doctor then advised me to staying in bed and have a good rest. After going home with my teacher, I took the medicine and went to sleep. Considering her poor health, my teacher cooked a meal and did some houseworks for me. Seeing the note she had left when I get up, I felt extreme grateful to my warm-hearted English teacher.
