增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。
What would life like without music? I wonder how music started and when we first become interested in music. Music is a essential part of my day. It changes my feeling and put me in a good mood. There’s nothing good to do on a train or bus than put on my headphones to listen to my favorite music. I like all type of music, from classical music and opera for jazz and rock. I’m always looking for something that sounds amazed. Sometimes I hear a song or piece of music on the radio or on TV I enjoy it very much. I always use my pocket money to pay online to download and saving the music.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Square dancing is becoming increasingly popular nowadays, that can be easily found in public places like squares and parks. The dancers gather in the large numbers and dance some joyful music happily. Therefore, not everyone is happy with this. Some people complain the music is too noisy that it affects their life serious. But I don’t agree with them. On the one hand, most of the dancers are retire women. By dancing, they can make more friend and enjoy their life after retirement. On the other hand, the places they chose are public, so everyone has the right to enjoy them there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays there are many students who are fond of American pop music like me. And with easy access the Internet, now we can enjoy all the music of the singers we love them like Taylor Swift and Sam Smith. I listen to American pop music with the purpose of improve my English at first. And as time goes on, I have found the new world in it. Every time I listen to American pop music, I feel exciting. The more song I listen to, the more I learn about the culture and people’s life of America. I real benefit a lot from it.
I can talk about American pop music all day because it bring me more than I expected. If you are a lover of it too, making it a lifelong habit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, we held our five discussion about what to present in our annual school art festival. And we decide to invite an elderly man fond of playing the erhu near our school join us. His music was very beauty but couldn’t get any attention from the rush-hour passer-by. The big day finally arrived where our festival took place. As a special guest played, all of us were lost in his music. After his performance, we rose to applaud hardly. From this experience, I learned about that, to people like them, what really matters is not sympathy but more attention and appreciation, which will brighten their life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Chang’an ancient music, also known as Xi’an Guyue, dated from the Tang Dynasty. Initial, it was playing only for royal gatherings. And now, the music becomes popular among common people. It is a typical representative of Chinese tradition music. Its history is much more longer than the western symphony, that appeared in the 18th century. In a process of performing traditional Chang’an ancient music, all performer must keep all the tunes in mind. As more and more people fall in love the music, this ancient art is now injected(注入) with new life, attracts more and more audiences from China and abroad.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Aimed at enriching our after-school life and develop our awareness of protecting our traditional culture, a Chinese folk music club is scheduled to be found soon. So club members are required now. Whoever had a good command of traditional Chinese folk music is warmly welcome to join in the club. The club will undoubtedly hold a variety of appealing activities, which are of greatly benefit to you. It is a club that you are bound to enjoy yourself while gaining knowledges and joy. Therefore, it is so a golden opportunity that you’d better not miss it.
To sign up for the club, you are supposed to hand in your person information to the Student Union by e-mail before the evening of May 3rd.
Hope all the students will take active part in it.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Among the colorful after-school activity in our school, I like dancing best. I have been in a school dance club since the first week I came there. After school we practise dance on a regular basis, which helps me connect with others and great enriches my campus life. I love dancing because of it is more than just moving your body for fun and joy. It is a way relieve stress and enjoy life. Beside, mastering any style of dance take hard work, determination and patience, which shape me into a better person. I would not be that I am today without dancing after school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Chinese folk music club is waiting for you!
Welcoming whoever has good command of traditional Chinese folk music or has a deep understanding of it, the club will undoubtedly hold a variety of appealing activity. Not only will the club organize diverse concerts concerned Chinese folk music, but it will offer adequate lectures as well as lessons, what are of great benefit to you. It is in this club that you were bound to enjoy a visual or auditory feast while gaining knowledge and joy. Therefore, it is so a golden opportunity that we can’t afford to miss it. To sign up for the club, you are being supposed to hand in your personal information to the Student Union by e-mail after the deadline of April 3rd.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is perhaps the most performed song in the world. A birthday party wouldn’t be complete with participants joyously sing out the song around a big birthday cake. Yet “Happy Birthday to You” is privately property and protected under copyright.
It is fine when you sing it by yourself. But if someone wants to do them in movies or TV shows or in any other commercial activities, they need to pay the Warner Music Group for a right. According with a forbes.com report, “Happy Birthday to You” is believing to be netting the company $2 million a year in fees, this could soon be changed.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（/\）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I started playing the piano at the age of six. However, when I go to high school I had to leave my family, my home but my piano behind. I missed playing the piano very so much that I spent all the money I got for my eighteen birthday on a brand new guitar. It was portable. I was able to play it whenever I went. When I was tiring, playing music relaxed me. It was perfect way to cheer you up when I was feeling down. I also made some good friend by joining a band. In a word, I benefited great from playing musical instruments.
