增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误; 2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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I really appreciate this experience as it raised my aware of white pollution. I'd avoid use plastics and urge others to do the same. Like a famous saying goes, many hands make light work. So let's start from us and act from now on.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering is not uncommon, what causes serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires everyone effort. As for me, it should start on the way school. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep ridden along the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to get use the zebra crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard them as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthily.
Not only will I keep from littering but spitting anywhere, but I’ll help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hoped my behaviour will make a difference.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Environmental problem are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For an example, we are using up the earth’s natural resources such as water, oil but natural gas. At the same time, we are polluting the environment with harmless chemicals and greenhouse gases, what has caused everyone on the planet great concern. We need to take action preserve our environment. You can conserve water, reduce the use of plastic bags and containers, and conserved energy. We can also plant more trees and flowers to beautify our environment. In conclusion, protect the environment is everyone’s responsibility. We should work together to make our planet true beautiful and sustainable.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, our school launched a campaign which intention was to promote environmental protection. The campaign lasted for one week. Firstly, there is a photo display to show the seriously pollution caused by human activities. Secondly, there was a lecture on many small step that we could take in our daily life to protect environment. For example, taking the bus or use the bike-sharing system would be a good way. Last but not least, we students were encouraged to decorating our classrooms with recycled materials. Through the campaign, we have been learned a lot. We realize that it is our responsible to leave a better, clean and healthier planet for future generations.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was taking a walk with my mother while I noticed some litter on the sidewalk on last Monday. I knew it was time to take action. So on their way home, we decided to doing some clean-up work. I took a picker and my mother hold a big rubbish bag. Together we did litter pickup on the sidewalk. I was surprising that the bag filled up so quickly. Then we threw into the roadside dustbin and repeated the process two more time. It gave us a sense of achieve to know we did what we could for Mother Earth. We were determined to do so consistent, maybe once a week.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We meet at the school gate at 9 o’clock as scheduled. Upon arrival, we were divided into seven groups, each take charge of an area. Besides, we put up a slogan to call on visitors protect the environment
With summer approaching, more and more people along with their kids spend their time in the forest park which some people leave behind them a trail of rubbishes. Unfortunately, our activity successfully drew much attention from a public in the park. Some gave us the thumbs up, and some joined in us voluntarily. How a successful and meaning activity he was.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Learning you are interested in a waste-sorting program in China, I am writing to give for you a brief introduction. As far as I know, Shanghai had become the pioneer of waste sorting in our country. Residents in Shanghai are allowed to simply dump their waste bags in dustbin. Instead, domestic waste is required to be classifying into four categories: dry refuse, wet trash, recyclable waste or dangerous waste. Face with the new rule and for every waste item under careful supervision (监督), many citizens in Shanghai find it a little too complicated and difficult. However, the majority of the people firm support the policy because it helps us live a greener life and makes our country most beautiful.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirty and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Now the earth is in bad condition. In some places, air and water pollution is so seriously that it causes many deaths. At the same time, many animals are in danger because of their habitats are being destroying. Lucky, we human beings have realized the problem. In April 22nd, million of people throughout the world do something well for the earth. Some clean up streets and pick up rubbish, while others give speech to call on more people take action. But we can’t expect to save the earth only by one day’s work. Instead, we should make every day Earth Day. Only by taken good care of it every day can we make our planet a better world to live in.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Spring has come with all its beauty! Trees have turned green or flowers can be seeing everywhere. Last Friday, my friends and me went on a spring outing. It was such a great fun! We cycled along the streams and down the paths. It didn’t take us long to get the foot of the mountain, that we left our bikes. Then we begin hiking. As we reached the top of the mountain, we were shocking to see many plastic bottle and food bags here and there. All of us started to collect the rubbish and then took it down the mountain. We felt happily to have done our part for the environment.