增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a lively discussion was held in my class last Friday. It was main about protecting the fine Chinese culture. Some suggest raising people’s awareness of preserving our culture and make people fall in love with it. For example, we could conduct creative activity like discovery tours and culture shows to help people have better understand of our culture. Others thought some courses should be offered in schools, whose goal was to help students learn more about their customs, ways of life and so on. And to my view, which mattered was that everyone should feel proud of our own culture. Beside, we should attempt to pass our fine culture down from generation to generation.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Good morning! I’m honored to be here but say something about how to reduce food waste. As we all know, food waste is becoming increasing serious in our country. Much food is throwing away after each meal. Therefore, it’s time for we to do something about them.To reduce food waste, we must order just as many food as we can eat. Besides, it was also a good habit to take the leftovers to home when we eat out. Finally, we should take every chances to educate people not to waste food. I believe that every small act can make great difference.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 55 percent the students spend their time reading textbooks after the school. Only 10 percent enjoy read literature. Why? They don’t have enough time but they have too much homework to do. Some complain that literary work are so thick that they hardly have enough patient to finish them. Others who only concentrate in how to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them with their exams. What's more, some students showed no interest in literature. As the matter of fact, books play an important role in our life. Not only can reading make us relaxing, but also it helps us learn the customs and cultures in the past and at present at home and abroad.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分
Nowadays, the great number of people, especially young people, like ordering meals online. It’s not surprised. First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people had less time to cook even one meal for themselves. Second, the development of technology bring us smart phones and new apps, what may lead to the increase in online service. However, we should pay more attention to food. As we all know it, our health is closely related to what we eat. Although the service provides us convenience, we must take the food safety into considerate. Home-made food is cleaner and healthy, so I prefer to cook food at home rather than ordering meals online.
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线 __,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students. As we all know, smoking does harm of human beings. More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes many illness. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is waste of money. What's worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
It is common phenomenon (现象)nowadays what there are some persons disobeying traffic rules on the road. What’s worse, many people always litters here and there in the streets, that makes me concerned. I have some specific ideas to share when it comes to handle these problems. I will observe traffic rules whenever I’m on my way to home. First and foremost, never will I crossed a road until the traffic light turns green. Secondly, I will always use the zebra crossing. Thirdly, I will never throw rubbish and spit on the road. More important, it’s necessary for everyone to increase awareness of safe travel. As the saying goes, “Many hands make light work.” Therefore, let’s join hand to obey traffic rules, which will matter a lot.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Denim, that is used to making jeans(牛仔裤), is a kind of cloth of cotton(棉花). Denim is strongly enough, so after many wears and washes, jeans can still be in good condition. But during the process, in whom jeans are made,the environment is polluted, but workers’ health are affected because harmful chemicals. Now people are working on solution. To reduce the bad effects, some companies recommend wash jeans every each 10 wears. And, when possible, air dry them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students are even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3.改错格式错误不计分
China is facing seriously traffic problems. Too much cars travel on the roads. This heavy traffic causes delays and a plenty of air pollution. Although many cities in China have traffic problems, some of the worse are in Beijing. One of the reason why there is so much traffic is what only a small number of people use public transportation.
I think one way solve the traffic problems was to make people use the public transportation system. For example, they can take buses instead of drive cars. Meanwhile, the government should make them more reliable and convenient to travel by bus.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays most students are addicted to sharing with pictures in WeChat circle. They even shared all sorts of photos in their daily life. WeChat does make it more conveniently for us to understand and communicate. Therefore, there exists some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is letting out our privacy (隐私), that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, others may feel uncomfortable, thought we are showing off. In my opinion, we'd better not post their personal information, or blindly adding strangers to a list of friends. It's much wiser to set aside some time accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercises.