增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays most students are addicted to sharing with pictures in WeChat circle. They even shared all sorts of photos in their daily life. WeChat does make it more conveniently for us to understand and communicate. Therefore, there exists some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is letting out our privacy (隐私), that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, others may feel uncomfortable, thought we are showing off. In my opinion, we'd better not post their personal information, or blindly adding strangers to a list of friends. It's much wiser to set aside some time accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercises.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are many reasons for WeChat to be known. To begin with it, WeChat is a relative cheap way of communication. This cuts down cost of making a phone call. Next, WeChat is to the taste of the majority of people with various functions; it is available everywhere at some time. However, problems existed meanwhile. Firstly, our identities can be given away but we can be for trouble. Moreover, it may make communicated effectively with others face to face less. Finally, our attentions might be drawn too much to focus on our work. There is still some doubt whether WeChat will improve before time goes by.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
I am delighting to receive your email, in that you asked me what on earth the 5G era will bring us. Now I am writing an email to tell you anything about it.
Indeed, the 5G era is just around comer. Talking of the era, you should first get to know that what 5G means. It was short for the fifth generation mobile communication technology. With the arrival of the 5G era, IOT (物联网) will be great advanced in the future. Besides, unmanned technologies will become more successful but there will be more and more smart home, which can serve us in our life.
Let me expect the 5G era together.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We are now living in an age, that TV, cellphones and the Internet are wide used. It seemed that many people can not enjoy themselves without it. However, if I have to give up one of them, I will turn off TV rather than turning off my cellphone and cut off the Internet. I can live without TV because of few TV shows can expand my imagination and there are too much commercials. Besides, most programs are also easy to see elsewhere. When it comes to cellphones and the Internet, they are more necessary for me. I need cellphone to keep in touch with my friends and family members, and all informations can be gathered on the Internet.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized how seriously this problem is. And they are never bored with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think smoking can refresh themselves. In the fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is a waste money. What’s more, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the development of economy, more and more people becomes addicted to the Internet and like chatting online. As a result, lots of uncivilized word appear, which can do harm to our society. On one hand, they were bad for Internet civilization. On other hand, they influence teenagers’ physical and mental health, what will have a bad effect on their development. As far as I’m concerning, it’s urgent to do something. Firstly, as high school students, it’s our duty to avoid get involved in the use of uncivilized words. Secondly, we should not call on our classmates and friends to keep away from it and say some kind words.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线。并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When Li Ming was a primary school student,he had to wearing glasses.Now he is becoming more and more near-sighted.The more he reads,the thick his glasses become.As far as I know it,more and more students have poor eyesight in China.
Why did so many students have to wear glasses?Sometimes they read in strong sunlight and sometimes they read in places which the light is too poor.Some watch TV too many.Some even have a bad habit of reading in bed.As result,their eyesight becomes poorer and poorer.
I think students should know the importance of protecting their eye.They should read in places with enough light.Look out of the window or just go out before reading for a while.In a word,we should relax our eyes as often as possibly.
