增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We are now living in an age, that TV, cellphones and the Internet are wide used. It seemed that many people can not enjoy themselves without it. However, if I have to give up one of them, I will turn off TV rather than turning off my cellphone and cut off the Internet. I can live without TV because of few TV shows can expand my imagination and there are too much commercials. Besides, most programs are also easy to see elsewhere. When it comes to cellphones and the Internet, they are more necessary for me. I need cellphone to keep in touch with my friends and family members, and all informations can be gathered on the Internet.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My friend Miguel and I were going to pay a visit on John, a nice boy we worked with whom on a volunteer project last summer vacation. Because he had just lose his smartphone, he emailed us his address and told him to just show up. As we wanted to come back home in the afternoon, we set off early in the morning. Apparently the address John had given us were hard to understand. When we rode along the way, our taxi driver had to ask directions. Eventually, with the help of a policeman or then a little boy, we were leading to John’s house down a winding road. How excited it was to see him! We finally had a wonderful lunch altogether.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Can you feel the coming of spring? When you have to take on your thick jacket and carry them in the hand, you have spring. I know spring is here when I casual think about ice cream and hear great deal of laughter all around. Oh, it is one of the best part of the season. During this time, beautiful birds’ songs, sweet flowers and shy sunshine always touched people’s hearts gently. Fortunately, I can’t bring you sounds, smells or sunshine. So just stand up, opening your windows and breathe in fresh air. What wonderful it is to find spring has already come, even if it’s too much late to lose extra weight for wearing a T-shirt!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents in the housework. Felt quite sorry for that, I began to think about how to do to help. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not to give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and another things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust of all the furnitures. After that, I sweep and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprise to see all the rooms tidily and floors shining. My mother gave me hug. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm a middle school student calls Li Ming. I'm writing to tell you something. Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students are even talking about love affairs online. In my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes correct.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My 71-year-old grandpa run a small food stand in a night market in my city, provide local snacks for people working overtime. Receiving payments has always been problem for him before I helped him. He often had to feel in his pocket for changes on cold nights while keeping eye on the food in the oven. After learning this I helped him set up with mobile payment apps like WeChat Pay and Alipay. Now my grandpa is content with which did for him, for about 95 percent of his customers pay with his phones. Mobile payment has become an essential part of our everyday life. It not only deep changes the life of young people, but provides convenient for the elders.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。...
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
For many people, music has always been part of life, and they listen to music on the radio, on iPod and on Internet. As is vividly showing in the picture, the music fan is trying to download songs he enjoys. But the website requires payment first every time he wanted to download something, that annoys him. How he wishes the music is all free!
Many people are used to free music being downloaded from the Internet without realizing they have done harm for others’ right. Music artists work very hardly to compose music. If not paid, he will lose enthusiasm to go ahead, and gradually we will find beautiful musics nowhere.
