增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.
Smoking is widespread phenomenon even among teenage students. The number of young smokers are increasing. It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students had tried smoking once or more. Some of them even steal money from their parents to buy cigarettes, that is terrible.
As it is known to all, smoking is harmful to health. And it’s even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also to their mind.
Teenage students are future builder of the country. They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well. So it’s high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking.
Almost all parents in China hope their son or daughter will have happy future. They are very strict with their children, and so is teachers in schools! Many children are given so much homework which they hardly have any spare time to do sports. The children are forbidding to do anything but study it. It is no wonder that there’re so many children tiring of their lessons. Some even attack their parents or teachers! I strong believe many people had already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. Shouldn’t we draw a lesson from the accident? Now our government is carrying on a plan to solve the education problems. Therefore, let’s work together.
As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicted to their phones, complete ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomena in our life. The reason is why phones nowadays can be used by people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. Moreover, people involving in phones fail to communicate well with those around us.
As far as I concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile, they should also care more about their family and friends rather than phones.
As the saying goes, time is money. And in my opinion, time is even precious than money. Why? Because when money is spent, we still have a chance to earn them back. But when time is wasting, we can never get it back. There is no doubt whether time is very limited, and even a minute is of great value. We should make fully use of time to do what should be done. It’s the pity that a lot of people still didn’t appreciate the value of time. They are wasting their time doing nothing of useful. We should form the good habit of race against time and make a difference in our world.
Nowadays, star- worshiping (追星) was popular among teenagers, especially many middle school students. Thousand of fans are crazy about the handsome appearances, beautiful songs and perfectly acting skills of their idols. They imitate whatever stars do, including their clothes, hairstyles and hobbies. As result, some of them forget what they should do and even spoil on their study.
In my opinion, have idols is not a bad thing. Therefore, we should make it clear which are the real "heroes". As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who is making the most contributions to their society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As young students we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful people and be real popular stars in the future.
That's all. Thank you.
As everyone knows it, people can get many information through the Internet. Meanwhile, people are also clear aware of its disadvantages, and some children don't realize they sometimes make friends with bad people online. In my opinion, people can use the Internet make friends, download useful materials and go shopping online. However, there were also many disadvantages of the Internet. If you can't use it correctly, it may be harmful for you. In junior middle school, I was once crazy about play online games and I couldn't control myself. As the result, my study results were getting from bad to worse. Besides, if you believe whichever your friends say online, you will be cheated by them some day.
Nowadays, with the growing popular of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting. According to recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think of that their handwriting is poor. And for various reasons, many students don’t want to improve his handwriting. 51.5 percent of the students thought that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improve their handwriting. Which the saying goes, “Writing style shows the man.” Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especial for middle school students. However, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.
Nowadays many people cross streets without watch traffic lights. So traffic accidents often happen to those who didn't follow traffic rules. Why don't people follow traffic rules？Because they haven't realized an importance of traffic safety. Besides, some people are such busy that they don't want to wait for the green light. How do we solve the terribly situation？First of all, we should develop into the habit of following traffic rules. Secondly, who breaks traffic rules should punished. Lastly, we should teach kids how to cross streets safe. If we do that, there will be fewer traffic accident and we will live a better life.
I left home at 18 and pay my own way through college. In the past 20 years, I have worked for everything I needed. So it shocks me what some people in their 20s, still get their life supported by our parents. Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.
It’s true that the job market is much more harder these days. Therefore, there are certainly some ways to make living on our own. Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college, we shouldn’t burden them at our problems. We should be financially responsible adults, made our parents proud of us.
