文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I was walking in the street when I witnessed terrible accident happened. A man rode a motorcycle very quickly that he fell off it when turned around the corner. Both the motorcycle and the man were rolled over. Luckily, it didn’t hurt everyone on the roadside.
The man was conscious and was bleeding badly at that time. I was worried and called 120 at once. In the same time, I decided to give him first aid at once before the doctor came. I managed to start to his breathe. Finally, the ambulance came but he was taken to hospital.
The family of the driver praised me for my help. I was proud of that I did for the driver.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I was watch the traffic, so I could cross the road. I moved a step forward. All of a sudden, a motorbike driver came from the wrong side, which slightly brushed mine on the right leg. I have bleeding wounds. The driver hurried drove me to a nearby drug store to buy some bandages. Seeing the guilt expression on his face, I paid my purchase. Meanwhile, I let him to go, asking him to take care while riding. Nothing in this world happens without a reason. I will treat the accidents as a warning and am more careful when going out.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last night I was having a shower in the bathroom at about 10:30 while the silence was broken by some unusual noises in outside. I quickly got dressing and ran out of the bathroom, only find a big fire on the third floor of our flat building. Luckily, most of the people, including my family, have left the building by the time the firefighters arrived. But a baby along with his parents were still trapped in a flat on a fourth floor. The firemen were true great. Some put out the fire but the others managed to rescue the parents and their baby. We are really grateful to the brave firefighters who risked their own lives to save ourselves.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, when Chen Hui was pouring hot water, he poured a lot into his wrist by accident. Although he felt great pain, but he didn’t know what to do. I happened to see this and immediate gave him first aid. Firstly, I asked him place the burns under running water for 10 minutes. After that, I put some cloth in cold water, squeezed the water out and placed them on the burning area over and over again. Finally, I covered the burns with the clean bandage. Gradually, he felt much better, that made me happy and proud of myself. Chen Hui expresses his thanks and said he would gain some knowledge of first aid so that I could offer help to others when needed.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin Tom was attended a pool party when one of the boys was found at bottom of the pool. The another kids pulled the boy out and Tom found so that he wasn’t breathing. A passer-by noticed the situation but quickly called 120. However, he was too nervous to knowing what to do. Tom was calmly and he quickly began to perform CPR, an emergency lifesaving procedure, on the boy. It was his quick thinking and positive attitude which saved the boy’s life. Since the incident, Tom has been responsible with ensuring that all the student in his school are trained in first aid.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I watched a piece of news yesterday. When a driver were driving a bus, he had a heart attack. To save the passengers on the bus, so the driver stopped the bus by the roadside and then loses consciousness(意识). Fortunately, he was rushing to hospital immediately and some doctors saved her. The driver left a deeply impression on me. He considered the passengers’ safeties more important than his life. Which he showed us was his responsibility to others. The driver set good example to me and I decided to be a kind man as him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This morning I was late for school because I became caught in a serious traffic jam in my way to school. The traffic jam was causing by an accident. A girl was hit by a bus while she was crossing the road. She was in so a hurry that she ran a red light. Just as she was crossing, a bus knocked into my bike. It was too late for her stop her bike so she was knocked over, that made her unable to move. She hurt her leg very bad. I think this accident is not a good lesson for all of us. It tell us the importance of obeyed the traffic rules.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipments into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England were very surprised see this that the balloon landed in front of them.