增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Helen Keller was one of the greatest woman in the 20th century. She was born in 1880 and dies in 1968. When she was 19 months old, she became blind and deaf because a serious illness. From then on she lived in darkness and silent.
When she was seven, her parents found out a teacher, Miss Sullivan, for her. Although Miss Sullivan had trouble teach her, they overcame all the difficulties which they met. With Helen's strongly will, she became a top student. Finally she received an university degree in English literature. Late on, she was devoted to helping the blind and deaf children.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to Xishan Park for a spring outing today. As soon as when I entered the park, a variety of beautiful flowers and green trees came into sight. Attract by their beauty, I couldn’t help taking photo.
As I wandered along the path, I noticed anything unpleasant. Two girls jumped over the fence to pick flowers and climb trees. Obvious, they didn’t realize that their behaviour had done great damage for the beauty of the park. Without hesitation, I went forward and stopped her politely. Quite embarrassed, two girls came out immediately. Then they took pictures outside the fence. Seeing that, I smile and everything looked nicely in my eyes.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was very cold and there was few people in the street. I was going home after jogging last night while I sensed something following me. Felt a little frightened, I was quickened my pace hoping to get home as early as possible. Just at that moment, I heard a strange noise, that made my heart beat wild. I looked around only to find the little dog walking behind myself. It scared me so much that I hold my breath. Shaking with cold, the little dog looked so pitiful. So I decided to take it home in case it was frozen death.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study was suffered a lot. Instead for scolding me, Mother gave me a book by Helen Keller and asked me to read it. Hardly have I finished a few pages when I was great attracted by Helen Keller. Despite her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieve a lot. This was her determination and courage that made her huge success.
When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also accomplish which Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ear whenever I see the book, inspired me to face challenges in life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Alice was born in the small town. Her parents wanted her to become a housewife in the future. But she has dreamed becoming a writer since she was young. So she took every opportunity to learning something about writing. Meanwhile, she struggled for her dream or withstood the hard life. She kept writing even if when she was occupying with many things every day. Eventual, Alice succeeded, and even win the Nobel Prize for literature.
Please believe that your efforts will pay off one day. When faced with all kinds of difficulty, Alice chose to wait patiently for opportunities and struggle with life, which made him a successful person at last.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Charles Dickens is considering the greatest English novelist of the Victorian era. So popular was he and his works appealed the simple and the experienced. The range, pity, and intelligence of his view of society enriched his novels and make him one of master in the 19th-century literature.
Charles Dickens' early life was terribly. His father, a clerk, was well paid, and his failings often brought the family trouble. In 1824 Charles dropped from school and did manual factory work, and his father went to a prison for debt, that deeply affected Charles. Shortly after come back to the classroom, he finished his schooling at age 15.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My favorite book is The Return of the Native by the famous English novelists Thomas Hardy. This novel was first publish in 1878. It is generally regarded his masterwork. In the novel, Thomas Hardy gives expression to his person vision of life. He points out that chances and accidents which are parts of life and he absorbs them in a theme of the novel. The story is very interesting or exciting. They may appeal especially to readers who are fond of excitements. This novel enables me to understanding life. So I like this novel better.