增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study was suffered a lot. Instead for scolding me, Mother gave me a book by Helen Keller and asked me to read it. Hardly have I finished a few pages when I was great attracted by Helen Keller. Despite her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieve a lot. This was her determination and courage that made her huge success.
When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also accomplish which Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ear whenever I see the book, inspired me to face challenges in life.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday my friend Linda or I had lunch at the pizzeria（做披萨饼的店）behind our school. I know Linda isn't crazy about pizzas; she came along just because me. At the table next to us, there were two guys from our class. One of them was really funnily. He try to imitate（模仿）all the people in the pizzeria. We couldn't stop to laughing. But there were some customers which did not like the fact that two boy were imitating them. They complained to an owner of the restaurant, and he angry came over and told them to stop. It was a pity because Linda and I was really having fun!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
in the same office so they walked together to and from
office. Some day as they were walking home together it
sudden started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella
and said, "My wife surely has foresight(预见). She
said this morning it would rain and tell me to carry my
umbrella with me." Dick smiled and walked to him, said,
"My wife has even great foresight. She told me not to
carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly
have with you."
