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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.65 引用次数:129 题号:12787181
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Home security is becoming one of the fastest growing technology market. Previously, home owners have to get expensive alarms. These systems could not be relied upon, and would even be set off if there was a power cut. Nowadays, with advancements in technology, it is easy to add extra protection your home at affordable prices. Companies like Nest and Ring have been released doorbells that also have the camera. The main selling point of these devices are that when someone rings your doorbell, you can choose to answer via your phone, even if you're not in the house. This can drive out thieves as they believe the house is occupied. You are able to turn the lights on and off while in another country,making it appears occupied. You can also monitor smart security cameras what can sit in your home, or outside on your walls. These also allow you to monitor your pets and children, keep your loved ones under your watchful eyes.

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