增加:在缺词处加漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Diana,
As for the trouble you mentioned it in your e-mail, I totally understand you. When I did good on my first math test, I told my parents about it, but they didn’t praise me, which made me feeling sad. Therefore, I tried to understand them. I know they love me. They want to strict with me and help me become better.
Not only can praise helps you become more confident, but it will encourage you to work harder too. I think you could sit down or talk with your parents. In the same time, always doing your best because you are the best!
Hope my advices will be beneficial to you.
Liu Jiawei
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr Wesley,
How is everything going? I am writing to ask if or not you can do me a favor.
Having heard that our school will hold an English speech contest which theme is “my dream”, which many a student want to take part in, I also have strong desire to participate. I am firmly convinced that not only can I improve my speaking English, but also I can become more confident. However, I have no idea what should serve for the content of my speech. Therefore, I also feel puzzled about how to express me fluently and vividly in English. Could you be such kind as to give me some useful suggestions?
I will feel very much grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some Senior 3 students can't study efficient because of staying up late. What's the more, many have anxiety, that also leads to the inefficiency of studying. In respect of the problem, I have some suggestion for them. First, they should have enough sleep, which is of great important. Besides, striking a balance between study and relaxation are necessary. Finally, it's a great idea for them to spend more time do sports. In my opinion, more attention should paid to Senior 3 students’ health. I suggest they take care of them so that they can stay healthy but study well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club.You’11 be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here.Here are the most visited tourist sites.
One of the pleasant place is Holland Common.This has been public land for two hundred of years,and that you’11 find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common.There’s information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day.Then there’s Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees.It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small,but if there were people around every day,many of the wildlife would keep away.
Have a good time here!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,
It is 3 months that I last wrote to you. Hopefully, everything is going good.
In order to increase the courage to speak in front of a crowd and improve our English, I’m planning to sign up for a singing contest and sing the English song. However, I have difficult in choosing a proper song, which need to be easy to learn. Could you recommend one to me? Beside, is there anything I should pay attention to while prepared for the contest?
I’d appreciate if you could offer me with some advice. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Peter,
Thank you so much for inviting me to take part in the winter camp organizing by your school in the coming winter holiday. Quite interested, I am writing to learn about farther details.
Above all, I wonder that it is convenient for you to inform me for the specific schedule in advance. However, this will be my first experience to participate such an activity. Would you be kind enough to offer any suggestions on whose items I especially need to take it with me?
I am really excited and look forward to it. I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenient.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的用斜线(1)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,
I'm glad to receive your email written by Chinese. Considered some mistakes in your letter, I would like to give you some suggestion about how to improve your Chinese study.
First of all, it was a good idea to read books about Chinese history or culture. Besides, you can learn Chinese words and idioms through example sentences better understand the meaning of it. More importantly, do not feel upset when you make mistakes, that will help you make a great progress in learning Chinese.
I hope that you will use Chinese natural soon in the near future.
Yours
Li Hua