增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My office was fill with fit, slim people. When my colleagues work out at the gym, I stayed in and read. Instead of reading adventure novel, I would go for science fiction. One day last month,my mum came into my room,advised me to play sports on Wi Fit (健身游戏名). Finally, I selected tennis-after all, my mum played it on my own Wi Fit. Twenty minuteslater, I was extreme tired. As I slowly regained my strength, I found that I wanted to play again, who surprised my mum! I’ve now had Wii Fit for three months, and I play at least five times a week. My friend Leo was so amazing that he almost fell the sofa when I told him I was playing games on Wii Fit. Now I’m more fitter and healthier.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A survey has been carried out among the students in our school, about the sport they do frequent in their spare time.
According to the information above, about 10 percent of the students surveying take doing exercise with their first choice. And other 10 percent choose walking as their way exercise. Table tennis as the national ball game in China had a strong civil foundation, and about 13 percent of the students admit playing them now and then. However, the most popular sport is running, that is both easy and convenient.
I am glad to see that more and more students are taking a part in sports or that’s beneficial for their health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you’ve been ill for days. How are you feeling now?
I know that you are devoting all your energy from study. But I just want to say exercises is as important as study. Do exercise will not waste your time. Instead, it can refresh your mind. After one and two hours’ exercise, you can study more effective. Only when you have the strong body can we keep on studying without feeling uncomfortable. However your study will be affected by your health.
I hope you can take at least one hour’s exercise each day before you recover from your illness. I wish you will be well soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
My school ends at 2: 30 pm. Then we can join in a wide range of activity. In my school, there are many clubs for students to take part in. I used to lie on the couch comfortable eating chips and watching TV until I joined the running club. Now, I would rather running hard for an hour every day. It is running which helps me lose weight, which provide great health benefits. Now I’m much more healthier than before. I am advised to keep going and I will be a couch potato again! Besides, either good grades and involvement in afterschool clubs highly valued when we apply for college. Joining clubs is on great significance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I often stayed up late and don’t get enough sleep. One reason is whether I don’t go back home from school until 10 p. m. most evening. After I get home, I still have to finish my homework or preparing for exams. Then, I check in social media or play games on my smartphone before bedtime. Sometime I lose track of time, and before I know it, it’s good past midnight. I think I should make better use my free time in the afternoon to do my homework or prepare for exams. Also, I should limit our smartphone usage. If I make these changes, I think I can get more sleep and stay focus in class.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I am filled with great anxiety. Therefore, I couldn’t be absorbed in studies, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got extreme discouraged. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said, “It is natural that in life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. Don’t allow them to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire you.” Her words were reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved.
So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandparents invited us to their house in the countryside to help harvest peanuts on last Saturday. They jumped at the invitation. The next day, my parents and I had hardly reached the destination while we were greeted by a green peanut field. I was so exciting that I rolled up my sleeves immediate and set about digging peanuts. In the beginning, I were enthusiastic and energetic. Therefore, after a while, my lands began to ache und I was bathed in sweat. Noticed my situation, Grandma reminded me to take break before starting again. Only then do I learn an important life lesson: harvest and comfort can not coexist.
