增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I was traveling to a music concert when I got into the accident. When I woke up, I found out myself in the city hospital. I had a very painfully headache. The doctor told me that a car had lost control but knocked me off the highway. After I left the hospital, everything was so difficult do with my injuries and I quickly lost patient. Luckily, an old friend of mine heard whatever had happened. She decided to help me out. She comes every day to cook and stay with me. Her companies made me happy, and get better was easier because of it. At that time, I realized the meaning of true friendship.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Steven ,
From you letter , I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following suggestions may be for some help to you.
To begin with , walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talks , you will happy find that they are likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually , you will enjoy each other company. Besides , you,d better to give them a hand when they are inn trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities , which you can communicate with different people.
All in all , follow my advice above , and you would find that it isn,t big deal to make some friends.
Yours ,
Jack
【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。
Last week I paid a visit to Mr. Yang, that was my former neighbor. He and I used to live next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, we were told that the old building, along with many other similar things, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street. So we had to move away because it. The only problem was that it takes quite a long time for him to reach to the downtown area. However, Mr. Yang didn’t seem to worry about the long distance.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Linda's father bought her a new bike the day before yesterday, what made her very exciting. Then she began to ride it fast on the road. Seen a man getting close to her, Linda couldn't stop it. As the result, she knocked the man off . Because the man was very kind, so he didn't scold (责备) her at all. Instead, he told her how dangerously it was to ride a bike so fast. He asked her to keep the lesson in mind. Linda felt regretful but ashamed. She promised keep the lesson in mind forever. Then, the man bent down and begin to repair her bike. After a while, he got them repaired. Linda was greatly moved. She thanked the man and left happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mrs Li was my English teacher at high school. I liked her when I first meet her at school, because she looked so nice or kind. Mrs Li liked to write something inspired in our worksbooks. So every time I handed in her homework, I was looking forward to get her response. I remembered one time when I was failed to do well in a test. Mrs Li wrote a note saying that I could make great progress next time. Whenever I was in troubles at school, I would like to talk to her.
I still feel gratefully for her words of encouragement, who have made me go in the right direction.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文，短文中共有10处，每句错每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
1. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When I was in high school,most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money.But he said he could only give me half of the money.He should find the other half myself.So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty.You can imagine how happy I was when I ride to school in my own bicycle.
