假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Chinese folk music club is waiting for you!
To welcome whoever has a good command of traditional Chinese folk music or has deep understanding of it, the club will undoubted hold a variety of appealing activities. Not only will the club organize diverse concerts concerned Chinese folk music, but it will offer adequate lectures as well as lessons, what are of great benefit to you. It is in this club that you were bound to enjoy a visual and auditory feast while gain knowledge and joy. Therefore, it is so a golden opportunity that we can’t afford to miss it. To sign up for the club, you are being supposed to hand in your personal informations to the Student Union by e-mail before the deadline of April 3rd.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sold some Chinese knots for me. I made it myself with red silk thread, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches widely. Appeared in ancient China, these knots stands for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends and hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 dollars each, of which is reasorable. If anyone wants to know many about the knots let them write to me. Also, do tell me if you need further informations. Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I am so glad hear from you. Learn that you are working on Chinese, I strongly recommend the novel Journey to the West one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature, It tells about a Buddhist monk and his three disciples, animal with human characteristic,traveling west to India in search for Buddhist scriptures. I think,the study of this novel open the way to Chinese values and history, from what you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture. Beside the novel offers a mixture of adventure and comedy, so while enjoying,you will gradually find you can speak and write in Chinese more fluent.
I hope you keep reading to enjoy the charm of Chinese language but you will achieve a great progress in your Chinese.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In recent years, there are more and more Confucius Instiutcs being built all over the world , that shows our Chinese culture has been become much more popular than ever. As one of the four ancient civilizations, China has long history and creates many splendid cultures. The ancient Chinese culture once had powerful influences in the world 's civilization, especially in Japan , South Konrea and other Asian couutry. The Chinese culture is slow accumulaled in the whole Chinese history, made it colorful and brilliant. If one want to know or study Chinese culture more deeply , he or she must spend much time. Therefore he or she can only get the tip of an iccberg.
Welcome to the photography club. Many wonderful activities organized in our club. As is expected by all, the training on what to make the best use of the camera to provide wonderful pictures are open to all new members. Besides, we will organize some traveling activities, during that the participants will have chances to show the pictures, as well as enjoying beautiful scenery. In addition, photo contests will be held to show your progresses. By participating on the traveling activities and photo contests, you can be close to the nature and broaden your views. Anyone who is interesting in photography will be welcomed warm.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改 10处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I first started writing poems in high school, but it were not very good. I just write down words without thinking about their meanings. When I turned nineteen, I was pleasing to go to a poetry class at the university on every day. It helped me focus on that I wanted to achieve through writing. At the same time, my teacher invited me join a poetry club, where we would all recite our poems out and offer different opinion. This not only helped me become more confident in speak in front of audience, and I also gained a better understanding of pace. The biggest thing I learned was to take a deeply breath and not to rush it.