增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday, my classmates and I went to play football. When we were running to catching the ball, I stepped on Ann’s left foot. As a result, the bottom of her left shoe got separated the shoe’s other part. Seeing that, many classmates burst into a laughter. But there were a little upset in her eyes. She just purchased the shoes a couple of day ago. And she was on an extreme tight budget. Yet she just smiles at me kindly and said I didn’t have to pay for the damage. However, I secretly bought him a pair of new shoes. Seeing the shoes, Ann was too moving to speak. From now on, our bond was strengthened.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Beijing attract tourists all the year around; the best time to visit Beijing is in October. I pay a visit to Beijing for the first time on last Friday. I was there for only one day. Therefore, I was able to see lots of interesting sites and I did have great funs. Hardly had I arrived at the train station then I rented a bike. I rode around the city where colorful ancient temples decorated the streets, among that my favorite site was the Imperial Palace. Night falling and had to work the next day, I had quick dinner in a restaurant and then took the high-speed rail back home. I am dying to return soon for a long visit.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On Monday morning some classmates and I heard an activity on Chinese paper culture will be held in the City Museum. Interested in it, both of us signed up immediately. The activity started on Saturday with a visit to the museum. Guiding by the guide we learned about the history of paper and process of papermaking. It was how paper contributed to human civilization which impressed us most. We had some hands-on experience after we left. A master working there divided us into different group. We learned with great enthusiasm under his help. Not until then did we realized that the wisdom of our ancestors showing off in paper culture should be honored and passed down.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
Last week, my class went fishing. It takes us about one hour to reach the fish farm by bus. It had four largest ponds. So, we were divided to four groups. Anyone caught the most fish in two hours won the game. At first, I thought it was easy to fish, and things didn’t go well. One and a half hour passed, and I didn’t catch one. I felt so sadly that I wanted to give up. But at that time, the class mate from another group came to me, he taught me carefully and helped me catch it. I was happy that I was both caught a fish and gained friendship!
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom and I am fighting. We used to get on so well,and these days,she has been arguing with me about my not coming to home. She thinks I should spend more time help her with the housework instead going out a lot. In her eyes,I’m just a lazy boy whom only loves playing. The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon,so I want to spend as many time as I can with them. I knew I should try to understand the situation from her point of view. But I hope she can understand what important these friends are to me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a neighbor who are a hard-working nurse. One day, she asked me if I could help her to deal with a bookcase that she didn’t need anymore. I said sure and we loaded it in her car. As we were working on unloaded it at the garbage station, my next-door neighbor came over but asked if we needed help. He carried that big bookcase into the garbage station quick! I gave my nurse friend a book calling American Nightingale, a book about Frances Slanger—a WW II nurse. I know my nurse neighbor doesn’t have time cook much, so I gave some apple cookies where I just made to her. And some cookies would go to my next-door neighbor and her family. They were very pleasing. I love my neighbor.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
On my fourteen birthday, I received lots of presents. Which present is the best in my eye? It’s hand-made notebook, that my best friend Jane gave to me. Jane made it by himself. On each page of the notebook, there’s a picture for Jane and me with some words. She either encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship. Every time I look at the notebook, I’m touching by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we’ve spent together. I will kept this special gift forever.