增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 2 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past 2 years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasures of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.
I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,“Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At the age of 12, I believed that honesty always rewarded. One afternoon, I passed the ball through an empty apartment’s window. The sound of break the window was followed by kids running in all direction screaming, “Run! No one will tell.” Therefore, I went to the housekeeper, expecting praise for being so honest. But he laughs, saying kids who broke windows did not stop to talk to him and how stupidly I was. I didn’t understand until my mother asked me how I felt of when I told the truth. As I was thinking, she continued, “Instead of which he said, keep in mind that pride in yourself will always be his reward.”
Television plays important role in our daily life. It presents a vivid world to us. People can enjoy whatever programs they liked at home. Television keeps us informing about current events, and allows us to keep up with the latest developments in science and politics. It is undoubted a great comfort to lonely old people.
However, television also can be harmful. First, some people complain television causes people to have little contact with their family member than before. Second, some programs are full of violence and crime, that have a bad effect on children.
In my opinion, the television itself is neither good nor bad. Whether it is good or bad depend on how people use them. People should choose to watch useful programs that can benefit from them in life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I once get a VIP pass to a huge concert given by one of the most popular rock bands in world. The ticket qualified me to meet all the member of the band backstage but to watch the whole process of setting up for the concert. The guitarist was a man whom was very kind. I did not have much anxiety while getting to know them better, but the rest were more of reserved. They just smiled and made friend gestures. Anyway, watching the stage being set up and all the microphones being checking, I understood how hard it was to putting on a stadium concert. It took hours of preparation to produce quality sound.
