增加：在缺词处加一个漏符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John, a heavy smoker, once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he turned to his doctor for help. “Quit smoking,” the doctor advised. Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating, inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, “One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day of me to break away from the bad habit…” Then he picked up a cigarette which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it “tomorrow”. Today John is still addicted for smoking.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale. They were quick sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine. They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety. I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I go to a painting exhibition. Upon entering the gallery, I put on the earphones, that could give me information of all the painting. Suddenly, I noticed an elderly woman who didn't know what to use the earphones stood anxiously in the front of a painting. I rushed her without hesitation and helped him put on the earphones. The woman thanked me for my kind. I realized help others could really bring a great moment of happiness. That day I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. More important, I learned a valuable lesson from the grateful smile given by the elderly woman.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I went to New York City to visit my aunt and cousin, it is a very hot July, so she was trying to find a place for us to swim. Find a pool in New York City was not easy. Many pools cost a lot, and she didn’t earn many as a waitress. She called up her friend Charlie, because he always had some brilliant idea. He was suggested that we go to his boss’ pool party. They worked in the television industry or always threw parties with many actors. Charlie said that we would be assumed to be actresses. When we arrived the pool, no one paid us any special attention. Therefore, at a certain point, my fourteen-year-old cousin saw a man and began to yell, “It’s Will Smith!” Finally, she got us kick out of the party. Later, we learned that the man wasn’t Will Smith. It was actual Charlie’s boss.
