第四部分 写作
第一节 短文改错(共10小题;
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a. m, I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because these books were all use to me. At last, I chose two. At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Now let me share my last weekend with you. I planned do many things on the weekend, but I finished my homework on Saturday morning. On Saturday afternoon, I did some houseworks with my mother. On Sunday morning, I visit my grandparents with my parents and then we went to the park together. There was a kite show and we saw much beautiful kites. Saw the beautiful kites, we determined to buying some beautiful kites. Then we flew the new kites, where was very impressive for me. In the evening, we had a big dinner. After that, we watched a TV together. How a happy weekend!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We set off very earlier in the morning. My brother and I sat in the backseat of Dad’s old car. We were excited because of we were going to countryside to pick apples. When we got there, we saw hundreds of trees filling with apples! Some were golden yellow, and some were bright red. We even saw some apples what were very green. I tasted one of the apples. It was such sweet. The sun was rising in the sky and we could feel the fresh airs around us. My brother climbed a tree and started picking apples. I stood on the ground to pick apples from another tree happy. It didn’t take long for ourselves to pick three baskets of apples. Then, we go home to make some apple pies.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
How are you?
A well-known play, Tea House, will put on in the newly-built Grand Theater in our city at 7:00 p.m. in 5th, February. I knew you are fond of Chinese culture, but I sincerely invite you to go with me. It is said that it is performed quite well by some famous actors and actress. If you are interesting in this play, I will book tickets in advance and we can appreciate it together. I think it is really a good chance for us to learn more about Chinese tradition plays.
Besides, there is a provincial museum near a theater, which is worth visiting it after the play.
How do you think of my advice?
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面处写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
One night, I called my 27-year-old son, he was on his way to a company. He says he would call me back shortly. Strange he did not. This was pretty unusual. The following morning, I called but got no respond, which worried me. Later, he texted me from his iPad, tells me he lost his phone right after my first call. He was very upset because of it held many memorable photo and texts. He said that a co-worker called phone, and a cabdriver answered. The driver said he would gladly return the phone or gave his cell number to the co-worker. What lucky my son was!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, I got a invitation letter from my friend Lucy, who asked myself to spend the weekend in her new home. I was really exciting to hear that, because of she is, my best friend. Though we went to different middle school last year, we still keep in touch each other now. I am indeed looking forward to see her this weekend. After all, it had been six months since our last meeting. I miss the days when we were together but shared our secrets. We can soon meet again, that is the best news for me this week.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Every time I was got high marks, I would show my test papers to my parents. They would be very happy and proud of me. But last time, I didn’t do good in the exam. I was afraid that it might let my parents up, so I planned not to tell them result. When I went home, I rush to my room. Then my mother asked me that had happened. I decided to be honest and told her the true. She smiled and told me she was still proud of her, and she believed that I could perform well next times. I was so happy to get some encouraged words from my mother.
