增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I went on a school trip. We visit the science museum and it was really interested. We got to there so fast by train. We saw some farms and village along the way. At the museum, I learned a lot about robots. I didn't know they could play chess about us. It was so cool! Then the guide taught us how make a model robot. I take a lot of great photos, too. after that, I went to the gift shop but bought some lovely gifts for my parents. They weren't expensive. All at all, it was an exciting day.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, eighty students from our school pay a visit to Ningxia Science and Technology Museum.
The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covers area of 15,000 square meters. The moment when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover, we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed for us most was the 4D film which made us feel we were in real events.
Though the visiting time was slight short, we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
After supper last night I went to the park nearby take a walk with my parents. To my surprised, there were so many people there. Over one hundred people were dancing with music. Another group of people were standing in a circle at the corner of the square singing some old song. Some small kids accompanying by their parents were painting toy dolls. It seemed that everybody enjoys themselves very much. I was moved by the scene in the front of me. I noticed most of us were not rich as they didn’t dress well and they seemed to be very happy. All of a sudden I realized that they were the really ones who knew the truth of life.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every summer, my younger sister go in and out of the hospital, but she isn’t ill. She gives toy bears to young patients which need a friend. My sister used to have to be in a hospital all the time, but she was happy because of she had a toy bear. She realized another kids in hospital might need some toy bears, too. So she saved his pocket money to buy 15 toy bears and give them to patients at nearby hospitals. Now she visits two hospitals every three months with several bag of toy bears. “I hope help as many kids as I can,” my sister says. “It makes me happily to see them smile.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I went the Three Gorges to spend my summer holiday. Although the weather was much hotter than that in my hometown, but I got used to it. Every morning, I got up early and go for breakfast ahead of time. Then I went to visit some interested places with Mary who was my new friend and I came across him on my first morning there. She seemed to be very familiarly with the places and acted for my guide (导游). During the trip, we had great fun and became very good friend. We have kept write to each other since then. How an unforgettable experience it was!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, our school had organized an activity to climb the West Mountain. As soon as we arrived at the foot of a mountain, we set out for the top in high spirits. During the climb, we had such much difficulty pass the rocky areas. But under the help of our teacher, we finally reached the top, where we greeted (问候) by the bright sunshine and fresh air. Seen from the top, the city was real beautiful. This event turned out to be very success. Not only did we take a break from our heavy school work, and also we learned what to communicate with each other.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,每句中最多有两处错误;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family went on a trip to Mount Huang in Anhui, famous for its amazing sceneries, during the Mid-Autumn Festival this year. It takes us about five hours to get here by train. Once we reached the foot of the mountain, we got down to climb it. My parents and I were great impressed by the beautiful views along the way. About three hours late, we finally got to the top. We had lunch there and the food was tasted really delicious. We both enjoyed ourselves that day but the trip was a truly unforgettable experience. To tell you truth, it is fantastic to be with my family.