【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。

Enlarge the vocabulary, as we know, is must for us to learn English well. Students told me that if they knew the meanings of more words, he could do better in the exams. But how is the way to memorize new words effective? Doing more reading and learn the words in context will work. The more you read, the larger number of word you will know. After reading, you’d better to retell what you’ve read in your own way, where will help you use the words flexibly. If you have your vocabulary enlarged, you are more likely to make yourself became a better learner.

【推荐2】短文改错
Dear Li Hua,

Congratulations to your success in getting so a high mark in TOEFL. Your efforts have been paid off.

Your success results from full preparation and your solid foundation of the language, but the most important factor is that you keep practice.

As the old saying goes, "Practice make perfect." It means it is practice which enables us to do something efficient, especially learning a foreign language.

Any perfect accomplishment of a task is the result of longtime practice. If we understand this saying but apply it to our English study, we benefit a lot from it.

Yours,

Li Ming

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的用斜线（1）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,

I'm glad to receive your email written by Chinese. Considered some mistakes in your letter, I would like to give you some suggestion about how to improve your Chinese study.

First of all, it was a good idea to read books about Chinese history or culture. Besides, you can learn Chinese words and idioms through example sentences better understand the meaning of it. More importantly, do not feel upset when you make mistakes, that will help you make a great progress in learning Chinese.

I hope that you will use Chinese natural soon in the near future.

Yours

Li Hua

【推荐1】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。
Dear Mr. Principal,
I learned the news on TV that an accident was happened to the Chinese students in a PE class. I suggest that our school organizes a first aid course, that is very useful. The reasons why a first aid course is necessary are as follows: we students lack first aid knowledges. A first aid course can’t satisfy our need. Beside, it will give information about many situations and give us the chance to practice first aid treatments.
As for the course, they can be given monthly. The course should main include the practice of first aid treatments. It would better if the experts in first aid were introduced to instructing the course.

Yours,

Peter

【推荐2】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉;
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Chris,

It is 3 months that I last wrote to you. Hopefully, everything is going good.

In order to increase the courage to speak in front of a crowd and improve our English, I’m planning to sign up for a singing contest and sing the English song. However, I have difficult in choosing a proper song, which need to be easy to learn. Could you recommend one to me? Beside, is there anything I should pay attention to while prepared for the contest?

I’d appreciate if you could offer me with some advice. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加漏字符号（/\）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Diana,

As for the trouble you mentioned it in your e-mail, I totally understand you. When I did good on my first math test, I told my parents about it, but they didn’t praise me, which made me feeling sad. Therefore, I tried to understand them. I know they love me. They want to strict with me and help me become better.

Not only can praise helps you become more confident, but it will encourage you to work harder too. I think you could sit down or talk with your parents. In the same time, always doing your best because you are the best!

Hope my advices will be beneficial to you.

Liu Jiawei