注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything but could make decisions by myself. Besides, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on their own, but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My role model is my cousin. She is a unusual math teacher. When I was in primary school, I usually feel weak and hopeless, especially in math learning, and she didn’t think so. Instead of make fun of me, she always encouraged me not to give up. Besides, she was also helped me with math now and then after school. Thanks to her encourage and help, I overcame a lot difficulties. I found math very interested and became good at it day by day. Much importantly, I came to know that a disappointment sometimes can become a turning point for a wonderfully experience.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In our life there are many valuable experiences. As for me, cook for my mom on her 40th birthday is unforgettable experience. In order to surprise my mom that day, so I decided to cook a bowl of noodles with an egg. Waking up early, I begin to boil the noodles in the kitchen. It were the first time that I had fried an egg by my own. Unfortunately, the eggs always got burnt, though I tried several time. Just then my mom came in. Seeing that I had done, she was moved to tears. He tasted the food joyfully, saying it was the more wonderful birthday gift she had ever received.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As my mum’s birthday approached, I was considering give her a unique gift. Finally, I decided to make short video to celebrate her fifty birthday. To do this successful, I did short interviews with my other family members or her friends, in which they all wished her a happy birthday. I include their birthday wishes in the video. Then, I added some photo and music to it and did some editing work. All this was done without my knowledge. On the day when I played the video for her, she was too touched that she gave me a warm hug. How happy I was to bring about joy to my mum!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tarry is my little friend, whom lives next to my door.
Last Monday, when I arrive home after school, I found Tarry sitting on the stairs. After I knew he had lost his key, and I invited him to my home. He started to do his homework. Meanwhile, I called her mother and told her what has happened. Soon Tarry finished all his homework. Since it was still early. I decided play Chinese chess with him so that he wouldn’t feel boring. Tarry was very carefully and he thought very hard before making any move. Later, Tarry’s mother returned home but thanked me for taking care of her sons. Actually, I also felt happy to be helpful.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was young I did not know much about the harmful effect of smoking. I did not know, for example, that it could do terrible damage your heart and lungs or that it is more difficult for smoke couples to become pregnant. I certain did not know their babies may have a smaller birth weight or even be normal in some way. Neither do I know that my cigarette smoke could affect the healthy of non-smokers. However ,that I did know was that my girlfriend thought I smelt terrible. She said my breath and my clothes smelt, and that the ends of my fingers were turning to yellow.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a older sister. Her name is Monica. He is very pretty and smart, with long black hair and big eye. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially that she was with family members only. Once I talked to her this problem. Feeling terrible sorry, she agreed with me but promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She had made huge progress on this issue so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have so a great sister.
