增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
By the time Kenny, 16, reached his three year of high school, he has become vice president of his school’s cooking club. Kenny said he developed his love for cooking by watching his grandmother, she owned a business. And at age of 5, he cooked his first dish. Take it to school for lunch, he warmed it up in the school’s microwave, while the other kid ate sandwiches.
“I love to eat, and it started to become much fun to cook than to have food prepare for me,” he said. Cooking came easily to Kenny. He was very enthusiastic about it that he didn’t let anything to stop him.
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增加：在缺的词处加漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Welcome to my school! When you arrive, there will be a party for you holding by my classmates. You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style. After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life. You can have meals together chatting anything that interests us.
The host family will also show you around some famous scenic spot. You can see pictures and statues of pandas everywhere because our city was home to pandas. There are many kinds of souvenirs to choose from.
So isn't it the good idea to buy some for your friends? Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除：把多余的用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
High school is a golden time in our life with great fun and fond memory. I will never forget those days that we enjoyed ourselves in all kinds of activities. It is no doubt that we have developed abilities and harvested friendship through them. More important, I am lucky to have been met many lovely teachers. They taught me not only how to study, and also how to be a good person. It will not be long until I graduate. Therefore, as student in Senior 3, I want to express my gratefulness to my teachers. It is with her help that I have grown up and been ready to catch up with the rapidly changed world.
Are students' grades matter of personal privacy? Should test scores be made public?
Opinions vary from person to person. I think it’s good to recognize for the top scorers — they will be inspired and keep try to maintain their high grades. There are some disadvantages, therefore, for the low performers. But competition is a life skill that need to be learned to be successful in the really world. The earlier, the best. Regardless of the type of competition, it will keep them motivating. It is not just about winning or losing, but it is also about when they get involved, enjoy the process and improve them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interested in astronomy as a kid and used to wondering how big the universe might be. As I grew up and finally went to college, I hardly had any time develop my hobby because there was too many homework to do. It was around the year 2010 when I researched astronomy again. Therefore, I do not have much time for my hobby, either. Often I would like to observe a object in the night sky, but I am either working and looking after my kids, so I share my hobby with my kids. I encourage him to observe the stars with me. I tell to them about the moon, the stars, the sun and many other interested things up there. By have a common hobby we can spend time together and we all find it interesting.
When it comes to music, here is what I think: Music is one of the important part in my life. The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but brought me pleasure. Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfort. I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions. While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regular morning routine. Also, I am planning to learn to play piano. My life with songs and harmonies would be complete empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Life without a hobby is like food without salt. It is a hobby that makes life interesting. It is a pursuit outside one’s regularly work. A hobby gives one joyful and pleasure; one does not get tired in it. It is a pastime, relaxation and leisure. In this way, while one is learning something, and he is also making the best use of his time. Gardening gives me much pleasure. When I saw plants blooming flowers, I gain a great sense of achievement. I enjoy tendering my plants and water my garden every day, what helps keep me active and busy. I grow flower and vegetables in my garden. In world full of tension and pollution, it is a great relief to seeing beautiful flowers and lovely plants.
