增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During the match, the players from all teams played very hard. Grade 2 was stronger. However, to our surprised, Grade 1 won at last. The player jumped and hugged celebrate their success. Just then, the players from the other team that came near and said “Congratulations!” to them. They worn smiles on their faces and you couldn’t tell from their expressions that they lost the match. We were touching by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
After school, I was about to enter into my apartment then I saw a little dirty dog lying beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediate the homeless dog filled me with sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become a member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. We offered him a shelter and he has brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
【推荐2】Several years before, my friend and I would often drive to Chicago to pay a visit our other friends. After a couple of trips we noticed that there was a homeless man always sitting at a same exit of the subway. One day we brought some food with us and gave them to him. When he saw what we have brought for him, he became exciting with joy. After seeing his reaction, my friend and I decided to take our action a little of farther. One night we packed up sandwiches and bottles of water, looking for people whom were in need. The look of joy in the face of each person we helped was one of the most amazing feeling in my life.
Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole.She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we got him out. Fortunately, she didn’t suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we’ll never forget it, though we didn’t enjoy ourselves very much that day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m longing to join in this activity for an exchange student to Britain, because I think it’s a good opportunity for me to improve my English or I can learn more about British history and its culture.
I have many hobby. I like surfing the Internet and do sports. In addition to, I’m good at drawing and I love listening to music. If I’m luckily enough to have the chance, I hoped I live in a friendly host family and that they are willing to take me to visit around often. I’m sure I can get well with them. I would appreciate it whether you could help me achieve our dream.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. They remind me my days in senior high school which I joined in the military training. It was the first time I have lived away from my home so I found it difficult to fit in. And the training officer was strict in me. I once thought I couldn’t stick to the end, but anyway, I made them. The trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life, but the difficulties I came across have now become a precious memory in my life. In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as a stepping stone to future success and make best of them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today our class went on trip to a forest. We went there by bus. It took us two hours to get to there. When we arrived, we walked through the forest in groups of two and three. We wrote down all the wildlife and plant we could see as we walked. When we found a unknown plant, we wrote it down in our notebooks.
At lunchtime we have a picnic in the open air. Later in the afternoon we returned back. To our joy, we not only learned anything new, but also enjoyed myself very much. I hope I’ll have another chance to go out for a more interested outing.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the morning of 15th, August, about five hundreds teachers and students took part in the annual sports meeting on the playground. The opening ceremony began with the national anthem (国歌) but then an inspired speech was given by the headmaster. When it was over, audience was amazed at the events, like the long-distance running and the relay race. Between the sportsmen, Jack and Henry, who are from Africa, stood out due to his speed. The sports meeting was lasted two days. When interviewing, Alan, a foreign teacher, said, “This is the most exciting sports meeting I have never seen!”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The opening ceremony of the nineteen Asian Games in Hangzhou was a spectacular display of Chinese culture and innovation. It was a feast for the senses, with amazed visuals, innovative performances or a moving tribute(致敬) to the history and culture of Asia. The ceremony was themed “Memories of Jiangnan”, use the element of water to showcase the region’s natural beauty and cultural charm. The opening ceremony also broke new ground in terms of technology, using digital ignition in the first time to integrate the concept of “Digital China” into the ceremony. Additional, the ceremony used a large number of drone performance to create a stunning visual spectacle. In a conclusion, the ceremony was not only a celebration of sport and unity, and a reminder of the rich cultural heritage of Asia as well the power of sport to bring people together.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During the match, the players from all teams played very hardly. Grade 2 was a more stronger team. However, for our surprise, Grade 1 won at last. The players jumped and hugged to celebrating their success. Just then, the players from other team approached and said “Congratulations!” to them. They wore smiles on their face and you couldn’t tell from their expressions that they lost the match. We were touched by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.