增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The writing class had just began. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be announce to read his or her paragraphs aloud. Some of us are confident to take part this class activity, while others were nervous. Though I had done my homework well, but I was afraid to speak before a large group of people. My father once said, “The classroom is a place where includes learning from my courage.” Remembering which my father had said, I raised my hand immediate.
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We have an radio club in our school, which started two years ago. I am lucky as I’m one of the host. Our club is much more than just music. Every morning we broadcast the weather, the recently news and some special messages. During exam time, we had a special program to tell students that what they should do for preparation. In the end of the school year, many students whom are graduating use our club to give messages to your teachers and close friends. When parents come to our school, we often play songs sang by the students and inform them of some important events.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day I told Mr. Wang，our math teacher，was ill. I was worried about him and went to see him after the school. When I enter his room，he struggled up to welcome me. I let him lay down again. Mr. Wang looked pale. I asked about his trouble. He says he was having a bad cold. Then he had a bad cough. After take some medicine he was getting better. He asked me that we liked the teacher who took place. When he heard everything was all right，I could see he was pleasing. Finally I asked him don't to worry about the work and have a good rest.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My name is Tom, a senior high school student. I would like to share my trouble to everyone and I am looking forward to get some help from all of you. Firstly, computer games are very popular among teenager nowadays, and I am also attracted to them. I am so addicted to playing computer games that I can hardly get rid of them, that does great harm to me ! Secondly, I find it quite difficult learn the subjects well. Thirdly, I used to be a self-confident boy, but now I am not confident in me. Though the head teacher as well as my classmates are friendly and kind to me, but I do not feel like making friends with them.
I wish I would become a outgoing and useful person from now on, but I do not know what to do. I would be very gratefully if you could give me some good advice.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I am a little kid, I have decided to become a policeman, whose uniform is so coolly. As time goes through, I gradually become aware of the great contributions made by the police, that give me a deep sense of responsibility in my heart. Each time I see the police, I am being encouraged a lot by my dream. To realize dream, I have to be fit by keeping a healthy diet and do exercise regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses in my studies. Although it is not easy to being a policeman, I’ll never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m Wang Hong, a international student of Beijing University. I have something to talk with you. During last year’s winter holiday, I go shopping with my classmates. While we were walking on the street, we saw several beggar standing on the road and asking for money. Many of them were disabling, which made me feel very much sad. Among them were old people, young people and even children. I noticed some passers-by ignore them instead of given them money. When I wanted to help them, my classmates stopped us. They told me whether these beggars were not worth showing mercy to because most them cheated people. Should I helped them?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Although the first time I flew on a plane were eight years ago, but I can still remember how afraid I was that day. As the child, I had wondered what it would be like to flying on a plane. In March of 2011, I went on my first plane ride with my parents. We flew from Beijing to London to visit ours relatives. It was a large plane. There were a lot people on it. I was very nervous during the journey that I did not eat any meal. I stay awake all the way. I wouldn’t go to the bathroom. I cannot tell you, how relaxing I was when the plane final landed at the airport.
